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How

WRITE

TO

RULES

EXER""$]"S

AND

ENGLISH

CLEARLY.

COMPOSITION.

BY

REV. HEAD

THE

EDWIN MASTER

THE

A. OF

AUTHOR'S

ABBOTT,

CIT^'OF

THE

LONDON

COPYRIGHT

BOSTON: ROBERTS

BROTHERS.

1876.

M.A., SCHOOL.

EDITION.

MOSES BERNARD

Cambridge

:

Press

of

John Wilson and

Son.

PREFACE.

ALMOST so

English

every

far

least

at

of words.

boy

clearness

as

Force,

difficult

to

teach,

writing

can

be

writing

clearly

depends and

elegance, and

far

the

the of

variety

rules.

to

main

of

clearly,

arrangement

style learn

to

are

more

but

;

teach

the

these

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object

write

to

upon

difficult

more

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Ambiguity but

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words,

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clearly.

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CONTENTS.

PAGE

INDEX

OF

RULES 11"13

RULES 14

40 "

SHORT

63

EXERCISES

41 "

CONTINUOUS

EXERCISES

64

CLARENDON

70 "

"

BURNET "

70"73

"

BUTLER

74"75

"

SIR "

"

ARCHIBALD

ALISON

76"78

INDEX

RULES.

OF

I.

CLEARNESS

AND

FORCE.

WORDS.

USE

1.

words

in

their

2.

exaggerations.

3.

Avoid

useless

4.

Be

careful

circumlocution

in

the

.

.

.

careful

in the

careful

the

5.

Be

6.

Report a speech ambiguity.

avoid

Use

a.

speaker 6 b.

7.

you

cases

Do

9.

or

First

where

Person,

where

"

the

he

"that," "

words

exact

use

of

the

"

"

it,"

and

or

if

use

allows.

euphony "

"

for

"while," what

"

"

or

is

which,"

or

he"

"for

Person.

"

who

"

Pronoun,

which

and

to

necessary

in

Relative

and

"

use

not

"it,"

be

to

that

the

using meaning is

other

"he,"

the

in

words, e.g. " certain." "'they," "these," "c.

given. a speech in the Third use a Participle implying "when," show "that," clearly by the context

When

if the In

.

ambiguous

Person

"

of

Omission

When

of

use

intended

not

are

of

use

Third

the

"though," implied. 8.

in

writing."

"not

or," "that."

"not

Be

a.

6

of

use

"fine

and .

"only," 4

sense.

proper

Avoid

for

it."

Exceptions.

which."

: (a] Participle or Adjective ; Equivalents for the Relative "c. ; (d) "Ifaman-" "whereto," (b] Infinitive ; (":)"Whereby," "And "c. of he," "and this," (e) (g) omission ; (/) "what;"

10.

Relative. 10

non-repetition Use

11. 1 1

the

Repeat

a.

causes

particular

Avoid

a.

Verbal

12.

Use

particular

13.

Use

metaphor

14.

Do

confuse

not

14

a.

Do

14

b.

Do

any for

mix

not not

use

persons instead

Avoid Verbs

where instead of

of

literal

a

the

38.

See

ambiguity. general terms.

Nouns

Relative, where

the

before

Antecedent

Nouns.

abstract be

can

used.

class.

statement.

metaphor. metaphor with literal to poetic metaphor

statement.

illustrate

a

prosaic

subject. ORDER

Emphatic

15. the

most

15 end.

a-

part,

OF

words at

the

Unemphatic Exceptions.

WORDS

must

IN

stand

beginning words

or

must,

SENTENCE.

A

in the as

emphatic positions ; i.e.,for end a

of

rule,

the be

sentence.

kept

from

the

Index

r.2

15 " 1

An

6.

of Rules.

gives emphasis. interrogationsometimes if ferred Subject, unusually emphatic, should often be transthe beginning of the sentence. for Object is sometimes placed before the Verb

The from

17. The

emphasis. 1

the

8.

Where

several

words

emphatic, make

are

emphatic. Emphasis can word. epithet,or an intensifying most

an

Words

19. which

should

be

as

sometimes

possible

as

near

grammatically connected. Adverbs should be placed next 20. intended to qualify. 21. Only" ; the strict rule is that they

to

is

given by adding the

with

words

are

"

before

it clear which

be

the word

to

"

the

words

"

should

only

they be

are

placed

it affects.

also," see that each is only" precedes "but of same speech. by part and other adverbial adjuncts,someAt times least," always," 23. produce ambiguity. the Nouns that they define. should be placed near 24. Nouns the Nouns should follow to which they refer, 25. Pronouns When

22.

followed

"not

the

"

"

without

the intervention

26. as

Clauses

close

27.

be

must

28.

distinct from Where

29.

the

on

that

there

are

word

same

antecedent

or

be

are

those infinitives,

that

distinct

from

be

must

see 55. "if-clauses"

should

preceded by independent.

several

kept

kept

clauses.

the consequent

"that"

clauses

those

the

sentences,

distinct from

Dependent

Noun.

are

conditional

kept

other

should grammatically connected parentheses. But possible. Avoid

that

together as

In

of any

be

are

kept dent depen-

those

that

not.

are

principleof Suspense. duce It is a violation of the principle of suspense to intro30 a. short and unexpectedly at the end of a long sentence, some unemphatic clause beginning with (a) not," (b) which." be excessive. not 31. Suspense must In with sentence a "if," when," though," "c., put the 32. 30.

The

"

"

"

"

"if-clause,"antecedent, or protasis,first. or 33. Suspense is gained by placing a Participle that

the qualifies

34. the one

Subject, before

Suspensive Conjunctions, hand," "c.,

add

the

e.g. clearness.

Adjective,

vSubject. "either,"

"not

only," "on

its omission would cause Repeat the Subject, where obscurityor ambiguity. 36. Repeat a Preposition after an intervening Conjunction, if especially a Verb and an Object also intervene. Pronominal 37. Repeat Conjunctions, Auxiliary Verbs, and Adjectives. after the Conjunctions "than," "as," "c. 37 a. Repeat Verbs

35.

Index the

38. Repeat

Subject, or

of what

summary is difficult

Clearness

39.

the

prepares the whole

other

some

increased, when

is

for

forming

13

emphatic word, or so long that

been

the

way

Rules.

is said, if the sentence of meaning unbroken. thread

has

keep

to

of

the

middle,

kind

a

the

of

the sentence

beginning of

and

the middle This

ascent.

a

it

for the

end,

is called

ascent

"climax." the

When

40.

feebleness,and

of

A

a.

Epigram.

43.

each

Avoid

The

as

descends,

The

descent

introduced

pectedly. unex-

clearness.

only

and

one,

principalsubject

sentences.

different

be

must

sentences

of

Conjunctions, by means beginning of the sentence. between two long sentences short intervening sentence

kept other

some

the

at

requires thought. a

or

paragraphs showing the

of

transition

BREVITY.

II.

46. Metaphor General

47.

be

or

connection

sometimes

one,

between

used

connecting words 45.

but

the result.

not

often

heterogeneous

connection

The

and

have

sentence

Adverbs

by

up

force

adds

Let

thought.

should

construction

new

42.

44.

ascend,

to

confusion, is

sometimes

Antithesis

41.

expected

"bathos."

is called 40

is

thought

is briefer

terms

literal statement.

than

less

briefer,though

are

forcible,than

ticular par-

terms.

A

be expressed by a word. phrase may sometimes often be used brief (though sometimes 48. Participles as may ambiguous) equivalents of phrases containing Conjunctions and 47

a.

Verbs.

Participles, Adjectives,ParticipialAdjectives,and Nouns be used as equivalentsfor phrases containing the Relative. may be brieflyimplied instead of sometimes 50. A statement may being expressed at length. be omitted. Adverbs, e.g. "very," 51. Conjunctions may "so." Exaggerated epithets, "incalculable, ''"unprecedented." t?.^. 49.

51

a.

may

if "c."

"

be used for may be used, so as to

imperative

Apposition

52. into

The

convert

two

sentences

one.

53. common

several

Condensation

Subject of Verbs

or

Prepositions.

Repeating

54.

Tautology.

55.

Parenthesis

56.

Brevity often

firstconsideration.

be effected by not repeating (i) the may several Verbs Object of ; (2) the common

maybe

used

clashes

what with

with

be

implied. advantage to brevity. See may

clearness.

Let

clearness

be

26. the

CLEARNESS

FORCE.

AND

Numbers

brackets

in

refer

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the

to

WORDS.

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words

Write,

not

"His

him,"

but

"occur,"

"

"his and

This

rule

power

"power"

is used

for

also

forbids

rule

This

this,

Avoid

"The

"

Here

often

are

Avoid

"

Her

See

"c.

of

in

use

of

different

senses.

since

Here

I

the

have

second

"nice,"

"awfully,"

(2).

Majesty of"

"Partook

here

heart

that

of

the

with

the

circumlocution

implies

"

The

follows.

pendous "stu-

and

"fine

is

writing,"

'

Write

and

sharing,

for

way.

and

of lunch.

partook

sufficed

"very,"

loose

same

almost

what

"incalculable," in

furnished

empire

have

would

is inconsistent

used

useless

the

corn,

"

inexhaustible

"

3.

slovenly

the

"unprecedented,"

words

it,"

together.

and

request, do

and

verse," "con-

"authority."

plains

supplies population."

the

twice

in

and

exaggerations.

boundless

inexhaustible

owning dis-

"

and

confused

word

your

in

transpire

"reverse"

same

lawfully

may

"

often

are

the

refuse

"glorious,"

"delicious," 2.

I

"event,"

of

use

to

power

my do

to

the

"supernatural," and

friends

"Conscious"

guilt."

"elicit,"

and

forbids

in

is

"

his

guilt justified

evident

circumstance

"eliminate"

sense.

proper

apparent

"unnatural"

"aware,"

"It

their

in

'

"

lunched.

incorrect

as

well

as

lengthy. So,

do

not

"individual

4. .

.

1

while

Be .

the

for

careful

and,"

For,

use "

at

"apex"

for

"man,"

"assist"

how

"any,"

the

reader .

beginning: is finding

use

you

"only," of out

a

sentence, whether

"species"

"top," for

the

"help,"

following .

sometimes

it is

used

"kind,"

"c.

words

:

"not

or," "that."1

"not .

for

.

causes as

a

temporary

conjunction

doubt, or

position. pre-

Words. And.

below, "Or."

See

Any.

"I

"

send."

15

this

Does

bound

not

am

mean

receive

to

or

every,

that you messenger single? Use "every" or

a

any

single."

-a

Not. enemy

(i) "I do "c." ought to

reason

for not

intend

not

"

(2),

mean

you, because you I intend not to help you,

help

to "

are helping you is,because you used intend "I to mean (3), wrongly

it is often

are

my

and

my But

enemy." help you,

my to

not

because

(but because you are poor, blind, "c. you are my enemy the latter case, not ought to be separated from intend. the influence of not distinctly marking the limits to which

)."

In

the

Only

is often

to

me

ambiguity

to

sentences

But

21.

see

Or. used

like

"

be

"You butter

butter

don't ;

I, on

this "

honey

or

is

there

The

"

:

me

so

much

a.

Be

4

different much

so

Write

The

uses

.

.

used "

same

that

careful

form

in

alone."

of

use

"

not .

.

honey

you

"

butter

.

want

want

honey

or

I

and

that

"

of

I

that"

use

of

"

not

for "I

I don't neither

want

of

slightestdanger

I

see

see

"

I do

neither

them

produce

not

see

reply past

"so" of

I

"

see

ambiguity,

that

what read

Thomas

both

much

this statement

desirous

am

scarcelyknow

in the

"

that

rare,

.

for

I do

surprised by

statement

jay

in the

"you

and."

not

resigning,that I scarcelyknow has impossibleto tell,till one the first "that" depends upon

whether

and

is the

it is

Here

but

nor.

"

of

butter

meaning is so regularlyused

"

am

for

strict

contrary, do not

"

e.g. "I

used

The

both

want

the

honey." But where ambiguity, it is desirable to use The same ambiguity attends Thomas and John is commonly but it nor John ; might mean, only one of them." "

helping;"

:

nor

That.

This

both."

them

butter

is often

of

help

rest

wait."

to

me

instead

The

"

however, Practically, want

advise

"nor."

like

nor

you

honey

or

I want

"

"

alone.

is

follows

as

say

for

preceded by a negative,as "I do not honey," "or" ought not, strictly speaking, to be

and,"

would

or

"or"

or

"

only"

"you

When

"

butter

want

ambiguously myself; you only "you only advise,

mean,

similar

removed.

used

revenge

ought

be

may

By tends, ex-

"

I to

sirous de-

am

make."

resigning,"

"statement"

or

resigningsurprises

"c."

ambiguous

words,

e.g. "certain."

L

sound, but different

in

meaning.

Even

where

there

is

6

1

Clearness obscurity,the juxtapositionof

no

inelegant,

"

(Bain),

e.g.

He

and

Force.

the

same

word

to

the

left and

turned

twice

used

lejt the

in two

is

senses

room."

I have known the followingslovenly sentence misunderstood : "Our object is that, with the aid of practice, we sometime arrive the where at point may " think eloquence in its most we To lie " has been praiseworthy form to lie" " deceive." to supposed to mean

careful

5. Be the

* *

He

hour

of

use

his

told

he

thought ambiguity is

different

to

that

if he

did

also caused

by

"God, certain

The

ambiguity arising

is well known. persons feel better in half an not

better return."

this sort, "c. foreseeingthe disorders

in this way,

us

friend

8.)

see

applying

he had

Much as

he

"it," "they,"

"he,"

use

you

(For "which"

"these," "C. from

how

(6) for remedy.

See

excessive

of such

use

phrases

of

passions

and

affections

disorders.

objects are, these compassion." Repeat the noun

Of

human

which

has

nature, arise

this sort

these

"Among

:

of

from,

given whose

or

fear, resentment,

are

affections

passionsand

are

fear"c." Two

distinct

of

it may

be

noted.

when

//,

referringto be something precedes, may "retrospective;" but when that to follows, something "prospective." In "Avoid indiscriminate it is retrospective.1 In charity: it is a crime," "// is a crime to give indiscriminately," "it" is prospective. The prospective it,"if productive of ambiguity, can often be omitted criminately by using the infinitive as a subject: "To give indisuses

that

called

"

"

"

is

speech in the First,not the Third Person, to avoid ambiguity. Speeches in the necessary

Report

6.

where third

crime."

a

a

afford

person

particular,though

a

the

generalambiguity

his

friend

to his

6

friend,

*

If/

Sometimes,

a.

words, and

if he

that

where

or

mentioned

did

the uninteresting-,

Essex

is asking

Sir

not

don't

(QIC you]

where the exact

in

feel

the

(5).

Cecil

feel better

writer

that

Person "

is

some

It

had

place which

deserved

1

require condensation,

and

the

Bacon

Thus,

may is in Lord

becomes

then

be

where

appointed Macanlay's

tedious

it drops

exact

lengthy

or

preferable.

it

said

"

know

always

told

"He

unimportant,

Francis

He

of

and

interesting un-

into the Third

:

Sir Robert the

to

to

as

case, "

write

"c.'

cannot

Attorney-General, the dialogue is (as it almost writings) in the First Person, except where so

"c.,"

better

words are Third Person

Robert

very common Instead of

such

should Noun

a

nothing to he hoped

mark

refer

superior

of

say

but

that

he

thought

his

own

that his father's obtain, and gratitude from the Queen." to

abilities equal long services

(i)either to the Noun immediately preceding, or (2)to in emphasis. all intervening Nouns to See (25).

Words.

17

in a speech reported in the Third of "that" 6b. Omission third person, that need when Even Person. a speech is reported in the Thus, instead of "He not always be inserted before the dependent verb. write, not said that he took it ill that his promises were believed," we may This gives a little more life,and sometimes He took it ill,' he said, that "c.'" "

"

"

"

'

'

7. When

is

what

walking," implying that,"make it clear by

"

implied.

the first

Republics,in

"

as Participle,

a

"while," "though,"

context

"

use

you

"when," the

also.

clearness

more

instance, are

desired

never

for their

they will finallybe desired at all, unaccompanied'by courtlygraces and good breeding." since they the meaning is Here there is a littledoubt whether are, or, //"theyare, unaccompanied." sakes.

own

I do

think

not

"

That

when.

or

walk)

on

is better

It

they

instead

(1) " While (2) "Because

relative

is meant,

to

walk,"

that

"men

use

when

"men

mean

participle. he

)

was

he

r-...

\

was

WalkmS

on on

road, ) h( ice, \

\ (i) the

,

j (2) the

"

f

"

precedes the subject,it generallyimplies participle Otherwise it generallyhas its : "Seeing this, he retired." He retired,keeping his face meaning, e.g. participial us." at If there is any ambiguity,write "on seeing," time, or while, keeping.

When a

walking"

men

use

If the

of the

they

when

or

fall." "

to

walk."

walking (that walk,

"Men

"

ice sometimes

the

cause

"

proper towards

"

"

"

the

same

8. When and

"which"

"for

the

using

the

where

he, it,"c."

Relative

nevertheless stood

he ((3)

will

Pronoun,

meaning

In other

/(i)he

retreat."

use

"who"

he, it,"c.," "that," if euphony

is "and

use

cases

soon

allows. "

the

I heard

guard

"

Fetch

that travelled

(all)the

me

pamphlets, which An

adherence

Thus

"There

:

door

a

was

the train. that

this rule

to a "

great nuisance a

with books

lie

;"

this (i.e. the

public-housethat

much

door,

would

ambiguity.

which

fact of its

the (i.e. B

the floor."

on

remove

that

whereas

table, and also the

the

will find

public-housenext

and

it from

"

on

would

heard

(and he)

who inspector,

(and these) you

was

nuisance," means was

the

this from

was

being

have

meant

public-house)

a

was

great

door)

next "

Next

a

great

1

and

Clearness

8

nuisance." about

whereas

antecedent,

"

introduce

"

be, maintained

cannot It is not, and in Elizabethan

(Probably a general impression

authors.

has assisted "who" to refer to persons of relative.) But the convenience

used as

a

that

English, is observed

observed

this

by in

the

the

modern

is

be

cannot

supplanting rule

with

in

best

"that"

that

with

rule, though

our

that"

*'

great that

so

adhere

advantage composition may who of where the The cases followingare some mostly used, contrary to the rule, instead of that.

beginners

thing some-

travelled

is

to

fact

new

or incomplete defined. unabove, "inspector" is a new fact about him;

incomplete, and requires "that complete the meaning.

"guard"

a

introduces

is

Thus, in the first example introduces complete in itself,and "who" train

"

that

antecedent

the

which

without

"c.

"which,"

"Who,"

the

Force.

the rule.

to

which

and

are

Exceptions

:" antecedent

the

When

(a)

English

who

uses "

to

His

say

is defined, e.g. by a It is rare, of that. English friends that had those

English friends, or (3)

That

ill when

sounds

possessive not

him"

seen

English friends, that had

of his

separated

from

its verb

from

and

modern

case,

it would

though

instead

not

be

ful,1 use-

for

"the

him."

seen

its antecedents,

and are that, though emphasized by isolation : "There many persons and good-tempered, that, if not strongly commonly unscrupulous, are Incited by self-interest,are ready for the most part to think of the interest ivho after that when of their neighbours." Shakespeare frequently uses the relative is repeated. See " Shakespearian Grammar," par. 260. be that. is qualifiedby that, the relative must not (c) If the antecedent is the Addison other Besides disagreeable. considerations, repetition " that I made That remark ridicules such language as yesterday is not I had made." I said that I regretted that that that hence the throws be preceded by a preposition, and cannot (d) That is to" This is the I adhere "This rule that prepositionto the end. avoided. sometimes unnecessarily But, though English, perfectlygood is harsh and objectionable,e.g. with some prepositions,the construction Such the prejudices that I jumped This is the mark were beyond" of these is that some The above." that he reason rose disyllabic prepositionsare used as adverbs, and, when separated from their nouns, give one the impression that they are used as adverbs. modern Engl'sh (e) After pronominal adjectivesused for personal pronouns, "

"

"

who.

prefers

There

are

others, several, those, -who

many,

can

testify"c." (f )

a

used

that

After as

relative.

9. Do

not

as

a

conjunction there

is sometimes

redundant

use

"and"

book I gave him a very interesting five shillings." me

"

cost

In short

a

dislike to

use

that

(c).

See

it is less evident, and

a

very

"which."2

present, and

absurdityis evident, but

the

sentences

before for

in

which

long sentences

common.

presented for rescindingthat portion of the petition to support bye-laws which permits applicationof public money "A

1

here 3

was

So

useful

and

Of

in several course

consideration, I am disposed of the following exceptionalcases.

that, on "and

mature

which

"

may

be used

where

"

which

M

to

adopt

precedes.

"that

"

Clearness

20

after which

I confess

had

"I

"

Write,

expected."

important

rule. the

nor

truth),

that

he

would

not

the

Here

would,"

refusal,or, (38).

or

not is

sometimes

of

"I

have

a

a

danger

in this

The

use.

be,

not, hear confess I had

I

This

neither

procuring them," of bread, nor crust

me,

may

would

favour, that

a

hear

even

meaning he

"that

of

means

There

"

but

he

expected."

Instead

I have

CAUTION.

that

Force.

particularfor general terms."

of

"

said

a

See

11. Use

He

had

I

expected

me."

life

"

negative :

a

and

is

a

most

necessaries

the

(if you can with to buy one." penny

write a

is

meaning

imperfect.

vividly expressed

of bread may exaggeration ; on the other hand, if the speaker is destitute not only of bread, but also of shelter and clothing,then crust of 'bread is an

be

be

may

exaggerated

philosophy and inclusive

be

to

be

Crust

an

imperfect expression of In

or

the

meaning.

science, where

and

the

language ought very particularterms

brief,general and

not

often must

used.

11

Avoid

a.

Nouns

where

Verbs

be

can

used

The

instead. that, unless

sometimes

are

Verbal

is this, Nouns disadvantage of the use of Verbal they are immediately preceded by prepositions,they liable to be confounded with participles. The

following is an instance of an excessive use of Verbal Nouns : The confession of the collusion pretended only secretary was of the king's favouring popery, to lay the jealousies still which hung upon him, notwithstanding his writing on the Revelation, and all occasions to enter into controversy, asserting on affecting in particular that the Pope was Antichrist." Write that he and affected "c." wrote "notwithstanding "

12. Use "

the

particular Person

a

What

is the

beauty

of

the

beauty

Under

this

head

may

An

This

of

a

"

daisy ? the

come

forcible

of Noun

use

for

of

itself."

fortress is weakness

this

use

is

and

"

shadow

of

13.

Use

African

mimosas,

Metaphor

"The the

class.

lengthy pedanticallybombastic, following paraphrase for "in every British colony:" Indian palm-groves, amid Australian gum-trees, in the

excess

e.g., the "under

a

"

a

with

Adjective :

of

compared with splendour of the greatest monarch What is the splendour of Solomon flower?"

compared

"

instead

ship ploughs sea," and shorter

cleaves the land."

the than

and

instead sea" "the

beneath

pines."

Canadian

of literal statement.

is clearer

ship

than

cleaves

the

"the sea

ship cleaves a plough as

Words. Of be

not

there

course

used.

14. Do "

In

See

was

them, deluging their

upon

invaders."

with

country

the thunderbolt

moment

a

should

Metaphor

Metaphor.

confuse

not

and

(14 a]

which

subjects for (14 b}.

some

are

21

The

Mr. Speaker, : followingis attributed to Sir Boyle Roche I smell a rat, I see him brewing in the air ; but, mark me, I shall him in the bud. yet nip "

"

Some

words, once good writers

many

metaphorical, have "

under

say

these

ceased

to

be

circumstances"

so

Hence

regarded.

instead

of

"in

these

circumstances." excessive of pedantry : disregard regard for disused metaphor savours unparalleled complications," but inelegant. Write, not, unprecedented

An

is

"

^

and

complications;"

"

he

threw

light

obscurities," instead

on

"

of

he

ravelled un-

obscurities."

14

Do

a.

after

literal statement

introduce

not

immediately

Metaphor.

"He

father

the

was

and

of Chemistry,

brother

to

the

Earl

of

Cork." "

He

was

And

was

not

Do

14 b.

a

of war, very thunderbolt lieutenant of Mar." to the Earl

poetic metaphor

use

Thus,

prosaic Subject.

we

poet soars"

"a

say

may

to illustrate or

even,

but you could not to greatness," soars though rarely, a " Even soared to 944-" Consols commonplace subjectsmay nation

"

illustrated

by metaphor to

commonplace commonplace.

say

OF

Emphatic

of the

end

rule, should a left the room

metaphor, Q\

illustrated

IN

part,

A

say be

and

objectionable, quite unBut jumped 944." by metaphor that is

to

SENTENCE.

stand

must This

sentence.

rules

common

most

a

mounted,

WORDS

words

i.e. for the

it is

be

subjects must

ORDER

15.

for

:

Consols

"

a

at the

in

emphatic

beginning

or

tions; posiat the

rule

occasionallysupersedes the about position. Thus, the place for an adverb, as be between the subjectand verb : He quickly "

"

;

but

if

quickly is to end, as in "I

be

emphatic,

it

must

come

told ,him to leave the room beginning or left he but quickly." slowly, "if" and Adjectives,in clauses beginning with "though," for often come the at beginning emphasis : "Insolent though he at

was.

the

he

was

silenced

at

last. "

Clearness

22

15

words

Unemphatic

a,

from

the

end

of the

break

this

rule

by placing

the end

at

"

To

the

"is

short

A

abrupt

useful,"

"

want

useful, "c." kind

words no

emphasis and

must

Latin

"

A

"

of"

witness

Bear

with is

; e.g. I loved

to

phatic em-

He

does

him"

writing,

become

to

or.

in bad

"

letter-

spear,

common

attached

how

It is

the

"ground,"

the

writhing to chippy" ending

pronouns from the end

moved

avoided.

be

fell

styles, especially in be so frequent as not

all

final

a

obtrusive

monotonous.

15 b. An "

"

ending,

be

not

I hear

In

.N.B.

is to

soldier, transfixed

The

Prepositions and

need

that

few

a

his inferiors he is."

to

though emphatic, "

longer

a

"

but

invariably been."

has

in the agonies of death." construing from Virgil.

harm

nothing

It is

writhed

Exceptions.

to

unemphatic predicate

how

he

"chippy" ending, even unrhythmical, e.g. We

fault

common

a

at the end, auxiliaryverb comes the position,e.g. justifies emphatic adverb

and

-writhed"

is

and

if it be

even "

proves

an

very

rule, be kept

a

adjective or

an

of

addition

above,

"

evidence

where

Often,

it

short

a

as

sentence.

Latin,

some

must,

sentence,

useful." Write,

the

"

long

a

know

roots, is So

of

Force.

and

No

one

doubt

can

guilty,would emphatic

as

have "Who

one

removed

ever

than

worth

Went

names

harsh the

been

remorse," signs it possibleto doubt, who

Wentworth,"

those

he

of

majesty

so

?"

"c.

ing think-

without

him

names

ever

features, ennobled

dark

really

is not

of

some

"But

thinking of expressioninto more

prisoner,had

the

doubt, Is

can

without

be

that

shown

"No Contrast of "c." with

16. The

gives emphasis.

interrogation sometimes

by

their

antique Jupiter?

an

subject, if unusually emphatic, should from the beginning of the sentence.

"

often The

is an emphatic position,though mostly beginning of the sentence the not end. Therefore so the principal subject of as emphatic a sentence, early in the being emphatic, and being wanted sentence at

we

to

us

what

the

the

near

want

to

from

Thomas"

or

Thus, mere

is due

emphasize

to

the

"

It

the was

emphasis

place for unusually, we

usual

"

Thomas

beginning: Thomas on

"This

conqueror

ought

benefactors

not

a

rule,

house

the

subject,if

must was

remove

built

by

that built this house."

"conqueror"

the great

as

comes

built this house."

"

"

is about,

sentence

Thomas beginning : since the beginning is the Hence, or

"Thomas"

"A

tell

to

obtain of

is not from

mankind,"

us

quite so strong the as

in

reverence

"We

in

that

ought

Order not

to

the

bestow

mankind, upon a emphasis and greater "

thus

Sentence.

a

is due

23

the great benefactors

to

conqueror"

mere

Considerable,

(19) \villbeobtained

smoothness We

:

in

that

reverence

of

the sentence

Words

of

ought

not

bestow

to

but

less

by writing a

upon

mere

queror con-

"c." Where

the

subject

same

rises in

and

first in several

stands

consecutive

it

sentences,

emphasis, beginning, even though unusual emphasis be required : "The soul of the expedition. He the life and first pointed captain was the possibility of advancing ; he warned them out of the approaching scarcity of provisions; he showed how stock "c." they might replenishtheir exhausted need

be removed

not

from

the

placed before the verb object is sometimes is in antithesis. This for emphasis. most common "Jesus 17. The

I

and

know,

Paul

I

know

;

who

but

he put to death." there is no antithesis

'*

ye?"

are

Some

he

imprisoned, others where

Even

the

inversion

is not

common un-

: "

Military courage, the boast of the sottish German, of the and prating Frenchman, of the romantic and arrogant Spaniard, he neither possesses nor values."

frivolous

This

inversion

sometimes

father

slew," and Sometimes the

and

Take

as

who

gentlemen

the

on

king

son

the

appropriate by some, interpretationsof the morning the nobles and

different

to

in

the

assembled

in

the

dreadful here they began to talk of what a ; and could scarcelyunderstand before. But Macbeth

castle

The

be considered

"Early

example,

an

attended

"

e.g.

in prose.

used

positionof a word may inappropriate by others, according

sentence.

in poetry,

ambiguity

creates

sparingly

be

must

storm

hall of the great it had been the

what they said, for he has been amended last sentence by Professor could Bain into " What they said, Macbeth scarcely understand." But between antithesis the guiltless nobles who there appears to be an can think about who the weather, and the guiltyMacbeth cannot. Hence, " what

night was thinking of something

they

said

"

ought

"Macbeth

not,

and

worse."

"

The

"

Macbeth

ought,

to

be

emphasized

:

and

fore there-

"

ought to be retained at the beginning of the sentence. The author alters, The praise of judgment Virgil has justly contested same with him, but his invention remains Virgil has yet unrivalled," into justly contested with him the praise of judgment, but no one has yet rivalled "

"

his invention" the antithesis

"

an

alteration

between

what

which had

does

been

'

not

to

seem

contested,' on

emphasize sufficiently one hand, and what

the

remained

the other. as on yet 'unrivalled' More Bain alters," He judiciously Professor how task he undertakes a must great ; for he maintain more to one," into " for, to maintain

more," putting the emphatic

words

in their

several words 18. Where are Which is the most emphatic. made, their

under

the

contention

pretence to

each

whether pleasantlydoubtful be to emphatic. parties

of of

that

tells

be

forced

one,

he

a

lie is not invent

sensible

invent

twenty

to

must

emphatic place,at

the end.

emphatic, make Thus,

serving

in

"The

it, in realitythe

it clear state

was

prize of

opposite parties,"it the writer means (i) state these

twenty

is or

un"

(2)

and

Clearness

24 If

for

(i), "As

the

Force.

parties,under the pretence servingit,converted it into a prizefor their contention.'1 If (2),write,"Though served in profession, the state was in reality converted into a prize for their contention by these two parties" In (l) partiesis subordinated, in (2) state. Sometimes the addition of some to serves intensifyingword instead of To all effect this they used emphasize. Thus, write "To effect this they used able conceivdevices," we can every device" want to So, if we emphasize fidelityin "The business will task your skill and write "Not we can fidelity," times only your skill but also your fidelity." This, however, somestate, Jhese

two

of

"

leads Sometimes

this,but the

antithesis

emphasis

"will make

antithesis

You

do not

know

be

cannot

expressed by turning sentence, it," or by some addition, as "You

should

which

they to

20

intended

be

used, I

"

as

For

should to

as

near

exceptionssee

be

placed

affect.

When

between

the

between

the parts of the compound has quickly left the "He

subject and

possibleto

as

shall

the words

grammatically connected.

are

29.

20. Adverbs are

"

it."

19. Words

Paragraphs

it." Where

in

as

the

know

you

hereafterknow

with

be

must

(2).

gives emphasis,

shall know

you

See

exaggerations.

to

the

See

30.

next

to the words

unemphatic,

adverbs

they come

is

if the tense

compound, tense : quickly left the ;" room room ;" but, when emphatic, after the verb: "He quickly"* left,or has left,the room When such a sentence the latter is followed as by a present there arises ambiguity. told him "I to go slowly, participle, but he left the room the the floor." on quickly, dropping purse Does quickly here modify leftor dropping ? The remedy2 is, to give the adverb its unemphatic place,"He quickly left the room, "He the else avoid to dropping "c.," or participle,thus: He and left the room," or quickly dropped the purse dropped verb,

or,

"He

"

the purse

21.

and

affected

"only"

Sometimes Of

course

should

be

use.

placed

strict3 rule the word before The

by it.

transposition of 2

the room."

requires careful

"Only"

is, that

1

quickly left

the an

emphatic Adverh Auxiliary Verb,

punctuation

oneself clearly,as express 3 Professor Bam.

will far

as

comes "

Gladly

at

do

the

beginning, and

causes

the

I consent."

it is better the ambiguity ; but remove possible,independently of punctuation.

to

Words

of

Order

followingis ambiguous

The

"The

heavens

The

and

the faithful

to

open

* '

placing using only

avoid

to

Sentence.

a

25

:

rule is to avoid

best

words,

not

are

in

only

"

"

"

only at intervals." two emphatic

between

where

alone

"

"

used

be

can

instead. In strictness

the

perhaps

followingsentences

three

only beat three, He beat only three, (2) (3) He beat three only, ought to be explained, severally,thus : than beat, did (1) He did no more

(2) He

beat

He

(3)

no

beat

the

ought he

of the

to

mean

.till he

but

was

die

not

all he did. (Here only modifies depreciatesthe action.)

was

and

" He word. only lived " " but He sacrifice ;" only great any " lived He 8. means only till v. 40)

or

(Macbeth, also, Who^w/j'

man

a

"

Compare

Only at the beginning of a statement you'llforgive me." only I know you, favour asked letters.

Very often, only

at

came,"

bring

a

friends

few

Before This

the

beginning of a Caesar approved."

"Only ambiguity of only is illustrated ten

of

yours

to

hath but.

=

listen to me."

"Only

:

on

an

use

immortality."

I don't like to importune the imperative it diminishes to of only is mostly confined "

is used

sentence

by such shoot

the

the

transpose make

"

was

man."

a

that

sometimes

did

he

kill,three.

not

three.

sentence

authors

best "

lived

than

more

three, and

whole But

:

He

(1)

for alone

"

:

Only

The is less ambiguous. " hesitate Don't to sentence as, five time. at Only estate any

A lone a

my

"I don't mind afeiv; only might mean, yesterday," which Don't hesitate to else bring a few or as fifteen ; many than five came yesterday." In conversation, ambiguity is no more more; fortunate unprevented by emphasis ; but in a letter,only thus used might cause "no Write mean mistakes. Yesterday only five came," if you

(fifteen)came don't

bring

"

"

so

"

than

more

five."

22. When

"not

is followed

each "He

Write

only

not

"He

ether

"

hand,

gave He

that

only" precedes "but also," see part of speech. by the same gave

me, not

me

not

but

advice

only advice,

only

gave Take an

also but

help" is help."

also

wrong. On the

but also lent me grammar, " He instance. spoke not only

me

a

dictionary,"is right. (adverbs),and this too, not only before forciblybut also tastefully small a audience, but also in (prepositions)a large public not only successful,but also meeting, and his speeches were (adjective) worthy of success."

a

23.

I think

"

as

not

least," "always," and other sometimes produce ambiguity.

"At

cousin's.

my

perhaps

good, yet, Latin "My "I

you

think

at all

at

"

my

all

will find my this Does

Latin mean

adverbial

exercise, at all events, as good (I ) " my Latin exercise, though

exercises;" or (2), Though Write events, as good as my cousin's"? other

juncts, ad-

"

not

for

very

(i),

exercise, at all events, you will find "c." and for (2), cousin's, find my Latin exercise as good as my you will

events."

is to avoid

The

remedy emphatic words. As "

and

Clearness

26

example of

an

From

City

that the funds

and the of

is often

adverb

practice,an

used

the sentence:

emphatic

guide

the

to

that

mean

"breaking

out

the

word, where

remote

is very

position

declared

the

in

Exchange,

the

on

This

word.

adjunct,take

ought

qualifya

to

emphatic than any nearer Adjunct is placed in an this very "On spot our

two

reports, but out

not (as is intended) that place in the City.

"hearing," the panic,"took

latter is more the Adverbial

broken

panic fast falling." This

a

between

adverbial

an

favourable

most

had

were

and

In

misplacing of

the

that

heard

all events"

placing "at

received

he

abroad he

Force.

beginning of

the

at

that

when

common

had

Oaverhouse

fallen."

24.

Nouns

they

define.

In

of

announced the

should Mr.

"

obliged

begin

to

"c."

works

to

regret

of

the

an

refer without

referred

however, to

by the :

son

author

an

the

of,

we

be

whose

by writing

"

We

of Mr.

death

"At

Smith,

money

of two

one

the

more

pronoun,

this

even

:

he

moment

is

nouns

be

may

the

they

noun.

this

gave me Avoid

also

Avoid, book," "

John

off."

well

very

decidedly superior presumed

came

to

inferior

of

noun

colonel

the

who

of who.

(John) was

preceding emphatic though

to which

nouns

of another

is the antecedent

with

emphasis, Thus

was

removed

follow the

of Thomas

Smith

supplied Thomas in

a

informed

are

should

the

Thomas

When,

we

the intervention

"John Smith,

other

difficulty

"c.,"

works

feeling that, if announced," we shall

He

be

is

death

author, "c."

25. Pronouns

unless

sentence,

or,

is

"

can

announce,

John Smith,

Smith

John

new

a

But

Mr.

"The

whose

author from

that

nouns

sentence

John Smith, an probably made

death

The

the

near

common

very

transpositionis

write

the

the

placed

be

up,

and

be

to

the

emphasis

the

noun

venes. inter-

the place of naturally refer

took

he would general. He gave orders to halt." Here that a intervenes. A conjunction will often show to colonel, though general the subject of the preceding sentence, and another to refers to not pronoun "The sentinel at once took aim at the approaching soldier, intervening noun. and fired. He then retreated to give the alarm." be called It is better to adhere, in most Rule to cases, 25, which may instance Rule of Emphasis, of which an (Bain) the Rule of Proximity. The sometimes A distinction in the last is was paragraph, misleading. given might be drawn by punctuating thus : " slew Goliath." "David the father of Solomon, who David, the father of

wounded

Solomon each

is

of

mercy

26.

be

who

case

built the Temple." questionable, and

But

the

it is better

propriety of omitting a to

write

so

as

not

to

in

comma

be

at

the

commas.

Clauses

kept

as

that

close

are

grammatically connected

together

as

possible. (But

see

should 55.) The produced

parentheses violatingthis rule often The result of these serious ambiguity. Thus, in the following: to be in oppositionto the view now observations appears generally introduction

of

"

and

Clearness

28

repliedthat

"He

(3)

Force.

wished

he

.

(2), though theoreticallyfree from

ambiguous, owing

unnecessarily.

to

loose

a

It would

be better

,

ambiguity,

habit

of

intended," "c.,

or

there

Where

any

there

When

dependent

are

said

"He the

that

capitaland meaning is

the

on

those

from

to

of

danger (2).

is

preferenceto (i) or 29.

replied,"c.

"He

Thus

several

the

same

that

he

indeed

(3)

(4)

or

in

that those infinitives, tinct word be kept dismust

his friend

to take

medicine."

study

and

intended, "c."

He

not.

are

wished

he

subject

:

help them,

ambiguity, use

are

the

conjunctionalword

a

a

practically

is

repeating

insert

to

full stop between the two statements. " He to repliedthat he wished (4)

or

that he intended."

and .

.

with

him

whether

it is doubtful

Here

visit

to

"

"

said that he

He

wished

take

to

his friend

(1) and also to visit the (2) "that his friend might visit study medicine," or visit to the capital, and a (3) "on

with

him, study medicine,"

capitaland

the

capitaland

or

might

that he also wished

also

study

to

medicine." the three

From

ambiguity

be

must

it will be

versions

different

(a] by using

met

perceived that

"that"

for "

this

"to," which in (2)],and

auxiliaryverb \e.g."might (b] by insertingconjunctions. As to insertions of conjunctions,

allows

repeat

an

(37).

see

"In

that "

to

us

to," and "for (wherever there is

expresses

a

purpose of," can

the

order

be

ambiguity) between

any and

used an

to

tinguish dis-

infinitive

infinitive that does an not, e.g. his order call to to friend, to) give (in upon till he about the trains,and not to leave him

purpose,

told his servant

He

him

information

started."

30. The "such may

principleOf

a that, until way feel the sentence

he has to

Write

Suspense.

be

the

to

come

incomplete.

your

sentence

in

full stop, the reader other words, keep

In

(i) by placing the "if-clause" firsthand not sentence ; (2) by words before the they qualify; (3) by using placing participles suspensive conjunctions, e.g. not only, either ; partly', on the one hand, in the firstplace, "c. reader

your

The sense "

in

in suspense.

followingis draggles,and

Mr.

Pym

was

an

example

of

it is difficult to

looked

upon he had

parliaments,| where of business, | being

a, man

Suspense last,in a

an

is caused

conditional

unsuspended sentence.

an

keep

up

one's

The

attention.

of greatest experience served very long, | and was always officer in the Exchequer, | and of a as

the

man

Order

Sentence.

a

reputation generally,j though known

good the

in

Words

of

Puritan

Eng.

party

leading men who

yet

;

of

not

those

furiously resolved) against the

so

had

were,

of

nothing

| and wholly devoted that spirit."

be

to

furious

29 inclined

resolutions

Church

to the

Earl

of

(Mod.

the

as

to

other

Bedford,

"

of the might have ended at any one foregoing sentence marked above. When : eightpoints suspended it becomes "Mr. in the Pym, owing to his long service in Parliament above all others for his Parliamentary Exchequer, was esteemed for his and He had also a knowledge of business. experience good reputation generally; for, though openly favouring the Puritan closelydevoted to the Earl of Bedford, and, party, he was like the Earl, had none of the fanatical spirit manifested against the Church by the other leading men." The

"

30

a.

It is

violation of the

a

principleof Suspense

introduce

unexpectedly, at the end short and unemphatic clause

some

not"

"...

(a)

"

reform

This

of

classes

Write

"not,

"After was

as

persuaded,

am

industry, self-

wastefulness, but

say,

journey, the

tedious

and

little

dangerous owing safelyat York, which

a

arrived

I

all

wastefulness"

say, some

long

a

will,

to

frugality."

and

dependence, (b)

some

as

(a)

industry,self-dependence,and frugality,

us

among

encourage and not,

and

countrymen,

our

beginning with

highly beneficial

been

already

has

long sentence,

a

which."

"...

(b)

or

of

to

last

part

of which

the

roads, we

of

to

the

is

fine old town."

a

state

When the short final clause is intended to be Exception. with it in comes thing someappropriately, unexpectedly unemphatic, of the sting of an epigram.. See (42). Thus : have been old miser said that he should The delighted to the fellow b ut most a shilling, give unfortunatelyhe had poor "

"

left his parse

has

are

we

been

home

pointed is

"

a

habit

of

waiting, i.e. out

the

on

that

above

objectionable,

his."

increased

naturally throws

Suspense for which

at

a

emphasis end

of the

especially

letter

words

the

sentence.

of

monotony in

on

final

writing

It phasis em-

and

conversation. Excess 31. Suspense must not be excessive. mon of suspense is a com" from fault in boys translating Latin. Themistocles, having secured fleet being now he had the safety of Greece, the Persian destroyed, when the bridge down to break unsuccessfully attempted to persuade the Greeks in full flight,and the Hellespont, hearing that Xerxes was thinking across

that

it

might

be

profitableto

secure

the

friendship of

the

king,

wrote

as

and

Clearness

30 follows

him."

to

The

Greece

the

idiom

English

more

safety of unsuccessful

secured

Force. is:

Themistocles

"When

destruction

by the

of

Persian

the

had

fleet, he

the the Greeks break down to made to persuade an attempt Soon the Hellespont. afterwards, hearing "c." bridge across introbe intolerable is tolerable in the duction in prose A that would long suspense Paradise Lost of the interval the See at to beginning a long poem. pare Comfirst disobedience" and "Of man's between Sing, heavenly Muse." "

also the

beginning

"

High

on

with

the

where

opening

wealth

the

Showers

on

Satan

throne

a

Outshone Or

of Paradise

II.

:

of royal state, tvhich far and of Ormuz of Indy hand

East with richest the gorgeous her kings barbaric pearl and

gold

"

"

exalted of

Book

Lost*

sat.

Keats'

Hyperion

:

shady sadness of a vale, the healthy breath from oj mom, and Far eve's one star" from the fiery noon Sat grey-haired Saturn, quiet as a stone."

"Deep Far

In

in

the

sunken

sentence long conditional clause,"antecedent, or protasis,first.

32.

Every with

that

If thou

didst

O, God Revenge

Ghost.

forces

"

ever

thy father's most him," as compared

Revenge love

of

expression

an

I should

"

thy dear father

from

agony

love

! his foul and

most

almost

complicated,and

clause."

didst

ever

effect is sometimes

long and

flatness of

"if-

the

"

Hamlet.

The

the

if thou

suspense

in

Ghost.

"

see

murder,

the

Hamlet

will

one

unnatural

put

a

ludicrous

when

it

murder."

unnatural when

the

consequent

precedes the antecedent

or

is

"if-

be

delighted to introduce you to my friends, the objects of interest in our show and to city, and the you beautiful the if here." in were neighbourhood, scenery you Where if-clause the comes last,it ought to be very emphatic : "

"

"if you were only here." of The introduction of

middle

a

clause with

"if"

though in the ambiguity, especiallywhen

often cause may of the sentence a great part depends on " that answered that, for the sake of preservingthe would

sentence

keep

cowardice would

they See

a

was

quiet the

put

for

motive off the

the

present, though

of

the

trial

delay, and to

a

"

"

or

more

"

:

"

His

enemies

public peace, he

that

declared for

convenient

this

they that

reason

season."

(27).

Suspense l is gained by placing a Participleor before the Subject. the Subject, Adjective that qualifies 33.

1

See

(30).

Order Deserted

"

those

if

and

had

that

deserted

Of

He

forced

was

But

stated

be

this cannot

if

write, "He, unduly emphasized ; to his enemies, recourse

have

we

effect is very flat. "He deserted was

where

done

to

recourse

he is

friends,"the by write might sometimes

we

"c."

to

31

have

to

Here,

"c.,"

his

deserted

been

course

forced

"

forced

was

forced

Sentence.

a

enemies."

his

been

write,

in

friends, he

his friends, was

by

we

having

his

by

Words

of

the

and

"desertion"

is

but

implied. participlequalifyingthe subject is introduced late in the sentence, it causes With this positiveambiguity : small force the general determined the foe,flushed with to attack recent victoryand rendered negligentby success." be

to

not

when

Often,

a

"

An

excessive

of the suspensive participle is French and objectionable: use with business of think to by nature, and too much engaged fabulous a spoiled by a long-established liberty and morrow, perity, prosof war, allow generations forgotten the scourge we having for many

"

e.g.

the

Careless

ourselves

remedy "

a

to

is

to

Because verb

"c.,

drift

we

the

therefore

the

only,"

"

nature

the

"oil

following sentence: in which

course,

"You

"

the

else

ruinous, or Here, the

as

uncertain,

convert

We

take

must

is

success

to

are

this

and

The

conjunction

a

:

the

participleinto by nature careless,

is liable

extremely perilous

failure

liberty of

meaning

on

e.g. "either," "not Take the clearness."

hand," add

one

the times."

signs of depending

Suspensive Conjunctions,

34.

well

of

verb

or careless, "c. ; with the principalverb, e.g. " allow we ourselves, "c."

by

are

co-ordinate

and

taking heed participleinto a

without

on

convert

your be

to

disgraceful,as country

is

dangered." en-

misunderstood,

"Either has gone half through the sentence. Write from the and the reader is, first, "c., prepared for an

tillthe reader you must," alternative.

Other

for our part though ; on 35. Cause

in one

hand.

Repeat the Subject when ambiguity or Obscurity "

likelyto "

;

the

suspensiveconjunctionsor phrases are partly, the firstplace; it is true ; doubtless ; of course ;

obscurityafter

cause

a

the The

Relative

omission

omission

is

"

professesto be helping the nation, which sufferingfrom his flattery,and (he ? or it ?) will not The

give

Relative

several

Verbs.

gentle

and

shades

should "

All

obedience

of life,and

be

liberal, which which, by a bland

are

to

be

dissolved

repeated when pleasing illusions

the

the sentiments politics "

realityis permit anyone in

it advice."

into

reason.

particularly

standing as Subject :

He

else to

would

by

that

this

new

it is the which

harmonized

Subject made

the

of

power

different

assimilation,incorporated beautifyand soften privatesociety,

conquering empire

of

lightand

and

Clearness

32

Force.

Repeat a Preposition after Conjunction, especiallyif a Verb and 36.

intervening Object also

an an

intervene. "

he

forgetsthe gratitudethat

He

he

when

all his

companions poor (to) John Smith in particular." Here, omit be "that helped all his companions, may

"companions,"

and

from

to, and and

and

which

on

meaning

the

John

in

Smith

"

object,"helped

ambiguity.

several Verbs

are

Conjunction

a

this

causes

there

When

37.

of the verb

intervention

particular."The

helped

uninfluential,and

and

was

that

those

to

owes

at

distance

some

they depend, repeat the

Conjunction.1 "

When made

have

look

we

in the

the havoc upon national of our

back ranks

that two

hundred

authors-

refer their

to

the

did

not

years

all,

-and, above

quick succession

rapid disappearance cannot help being dismayed at the competitors we of the present day." that writers lies before the prospect substitute a parenthetical omit Here "when," and we at once clause. for what is reallya subordinate statement be In reportinga speech or opinion, that" must continually of what the avoid the writer says to confusing danger repeated, (when)

of

we

new

"

"

with

others

what

"We

might

Christians

;

rightly or

say.

evidence

only

37

in secret

frankincense

throw

but

on

of the

Repeat Verbs

a.

the

Caesars

(that) they only punished men wrongly, with burning Rome,

foulest abominations to

that

say

assemblies

the altar

of

crime."

who

committing

and

(that) the

; and

Jupiterwas

But

after

persecute the were charged,

the

the

not

the

refusal

crime,

(6 b).

see

conjunctions "than,"

"as," "c. "

I think

like

me,"

"

the

he

or

better

me

likes

you."

Richelieu

hated

"he

Cardinal

Spaniard Olivares." 38.

If the

keep the subject,or what

The

conducive

some

and

populous nation.

thread

"

"

you

;

i.e. either

"did,"

is

so

and

as

you

long that

"

than

you

sincerelyas did cause ambiguity.

it is difficult to

of

unbroken, meaning other emphatic word, or a

repeat

the of

summary

said.

cotton,

cities

than

Buckingham

Omit

sentence

been

has

"Gold

1

likes

these

banks are

not

and

railways, crowded

the elements

ports, and

that constitute

a

great

Adjectives

is also

"

repetitionof Auxiliary to

clearness.

Verbs

and

Pronominal

Order

Words

of

in

Sentence.

a

33

This

repetition(though useful and, when used in moderation, with not common speakers than with unpleasant) is more writers,and with slovenlyspeakers than with good speakers. "The

country

fair

some

is in such

and

I say, if we that

condition, that

if

much

adopt

if

more, unwise

so

more

whatsoever

is in such

policy,the country

a

the satisfy

all reform

refuse

we

delay longer

we

of reform, sufficient at least to

measure

moderate,

a

"

"

a

dition con-

a revolution." precipitate is either implied (in a participle)or often be repeated also. In the must repeated,the antecedent have the not sentence we following only in Subject icpeated we

Where

may

relative

the

the final summary, " if there But church

regarded to

its

also

but

the

as

antecedent

:

"

were, part of the world, a national any heretical as mitted by four-fifths of the nation com-

care

in

church

; a

established

and

producing twice as many riots which, though possessing great wealth though long backed by persecuting laws, had, sword;

church

a

as

church

found

generations, been

many and

barely able

maintain

unable

to

by the conversions; a

maintained

and in

the

of

course

its doctrines, odious that

propagate

its

and

power,

church

ground ; against its clear rightsof property, fair church whose were generally regarded as play ; a ministers were preaching to desolate walls, and with difficulty obtaining their lawful subsistence by the help of bayonets, fraud

to

violence, when

and

a

so

used

"

such

Churchyon

a

could principles,

our

not,

must

we

own,

be defended."

39. It is

a

help

clearness,when

to

for the prepares the way for the end, in a kind of ascent,

the sentence middle "

called

following there

terms

"To

first

middle

part of

and

the

This ascent is

climax."

the

In

three

the

:

are

of which

climaxes, each

two

has

"

gossip(a)

is

fault (b) ; to

a

crime

libel(ti\a

(b');

to

slander (a"),a sin(b")." the

In

they

following,

contribute

"Man, declare

there

climaxes, and

several

are

to the clearness

of

a

long

sentence

:

note

how

"

contrived '(a) the Atlantic Cable, but I far more think that it astonishes $"} me to ft"\.forhismere

working,

amusement

created^}

has

(c), that

to

Othello'

and

*

entertain '

a

Lear,' and

mere

I

am

idle

hour(d),

more

than

he

has

astonished, I

make

of his nature inexplicable elasticity of from turning away ("} calamity him, instead of to ("'}them, or merely defying actually (e), grief draw his and from amusement to them the material of (ft),

the

"wildest

am

which and

awe-

struck

enables

($\

at

that

instead

agoniesof

a '(e') spirit pleasure which

the human C

is

and

Clearness

34

only not crue^f), but ennobling({'}."

is in

not

The flow

neglect of climax

produces an Thus, if Pope,

thought.

of

Force.

the

highest degree pure

abruptness in his

that interferes

ironical

address

with

the

mankind,

to

and

even

had

written" "

where science mount Go, wondrous creature, guides the tides ; Go, measure earth, weigh air, and state Wisdom how rule" to Go, teach Eternal

;

"

the

ascent

"nd

from

would

have

been

investigating "

the

Instruct Correct

Go,

the

the

40. When

with first

The

thought

the

to

is

from earth to heaven, by the intervening climax "

orbs

to

run

the

;

Sun

th' empyreal perfect,and

:

sphere, first fair."

expected to

sometimes

and

ascend

and

confusion

yet

is the

is called "bathos." the

describe

can

pen agonies, the

transition

regulate

first

good,

descent

"What

and

Plato

descends, feebleness result.

The

is prepared

planets in what

Time,

old

soar

To

rapid.

too

governing,

to

animated

the

tears,

lamentations, the

of

remonstrances

unfortunate

prisoners?" She

of

accomplishments and virtues, winning in her address, a kind friend, movements, affectionate faithful and mother, and she a loving wife, a most played beautifullyon the pianoforte "

was

a

woman

many

gracefulin her

"

INTENTIONAL sometimes

For

humorous

incongruity and abruptness that climax ending with the line"

is

after the Wisdom

Eternal

how

to

rule,"

adds"

"Then

40

a

example,

teach

"Go, Pope

has

BATHOS

forcible.

a.

Without

A

drop into thyself,and

construction

new

should

a.

fool."

not

be

introduced

apparentlyunnecessary change of construction awkwardness and roughness at least,and somecauses times breaks the flow of the sentence so seriouslyas to cause plexity. pervirtuous and accomplished," or "of Thus, write many virtues and accomplishments," not "of many virtues and accomplished ;" "riding or walking" or "on foot or horseback," not foot or riding." In the same "on do not put adjectives way, and active and forms of participles, verbs, in too close passive the following: such sentences as juxtaposition. Avoid cause.

"

A sudden

be

and

"

"

"

He

had

good reason (accidental) but

to beliez"e that

the

not an delay was (to premeditated, for supposing else, for believing,above) that the fort,though strong or suppose, both be forced by art and naturally (nature), would by the and the indolent treachery of the governor (indolence of the)

accident

general to capitulatewithin

and

a

week."

36

Clearness

The "

of

of

name

An

educated

epigram

sometimes

may

should

man

and

know

Force.

he

something

antithesis ; e.g. given to a mere of everything, and everything

something."

43. Let each

have

sentence

one, and

only one, principal

subject of thought. "This

eldest, heir

the

George,

principal estates property

the

to

the

on

of many

memory three

were

Cumberland, shortly afterwards

September, actions, of them,

one

;

his father's virtues, as

well of

most

situate, and

was

of

noble

sons

where

in

I7th

elected

to

(2) "George," (3)

man,"

considered

father's for

member

should

county," disputingwhich if not three principalsubject. Two,

the

have

sentence

level.

The be

must

kept

Of each

up

some

of their

Pitt

His

in

was

biographer

the

of the

one

it will

be

meaning

:

.

.

had

.

so

the

seen

for

army

had

a

in

to

ever

this sort

scarcely ever praise as

of

not

was

with

every

the main

of

scene

action.

The

which

is

a

publiclife of

lived Pitt.

complete

Pitt

(,on

this

lence. excela

person He was

and

wellof

or

criticised in

and

esse

Hampden be

viewed

be

to

if

have

(Buf)

merely a great poet in example of moral

(Btif]his

man.

would

lived.

finished

is,that] there

little claim

of peace.

confessing, that,

service, he

that

not a

on

our

the

commanders

( The truth

in time

months

few

remained

ablest

as

public life of proportioned greatness. The resembles drama which Somers a regular can and

sentences

necting conjunctionsand other conthat the following sentences

insists (accordingly!]

(undoubtedly] a great

whole,

one

"

Pitt (,//seems,)was general in posse, but

great

subjects on

different

used

out

all.

is not

who

between

Leave

"

the

cornet

young

been

long

a

Conjunctions, or by at the beginning other connecting words

words, and "

different

many

Adverbs

by

Sentence.

lose much

is to be sentences

Carefully avoid

one.

family good

heterogeneous.

connection

of

means

of

made, instead this, treatingof

It is called

44.

"the

been

like

his

to

as

his

had for several generations returned this county, which in Parliament." Here serve we have^(i) the "great and

the

a

died

man

him

family,of whom

numerous

a

good

behind

1683, leaving and

and

great

as

a

connection

the other

hand,)

is," "c.

following

The

adverbs,

or

are

of

some

connecting phrases

similarity,repetition,

or

the :

most

(i) expressing

resumption

of

therefore,then, naturally, so that, thus, more,

to

resume,

to

continue,

to

sum

connecting

common

up,

a

in

in

consequence,

subject accordingly, "

this way,

fact, upon

once again, this ; (2) expressing

however, opposition nevertheless,in spiteof this,yet, still, the contrary, on the other hand ; (3) expressingsuspension "

but) on

"

Order

but ; indeed

undoubtedly the other ; partly .

.

.

.

a

conjunctionat all

no

"Blake made and

with

war

45.

The

hand

one

.

.

on

.

others. .

.

which

Bishop Burnet, "and"

with

happened

; and

gether stringsto-

"so,"

or

; and

did."

who

at those

be

to

with

or

"

two

he

ashore,

went

only paid

Write

before

Malaga,

seamen

not

between

requires

at

of his

some

about

connection

sometimes

the

; on

37

:

carried

it,but laughed

to

yet

.

.

sentences

Spain

upon the Host

met

.

Sentence.

a

some

y

of

that

fleet

the

.

partly

.

.

a style like of number

Avoid

in

Words

of

no

respect "c."

When

Blake

long

sentences

intervening sentence, thought.

short

a

of

showing the transition

ness the fierceopposition,it (chivalry)subdued of pride and to the ; it obliged sovereignsto submit power x of social esteem, soft collar compelled stern authorityto submit dued to elegance,and gave a dominating vanquisher of laws to be subBut now (allis to be changed:} all the pleasing by manners. made illusions which monized gentleand obedience liberal,which harpower "Without

force

or

the different shades

of

empire

reason."

light and

transition

would

which, by

a

bland

lation, assimi-

that beautifyand incorporatedinto politicsthe sentiments dissolved be this to new privatesociety,are by conquering

soften

the

of life,and

would

be

If the words

abrupt

too

:

italicized

the

omitted,

were

conjunction but

alone

insufficient.

be

BREVITY. briefer

is

46. Metaphor (13).

than

literal

statement.

See

"The

crown,"

where

effect of

47. than matter

poems

a

of a sovereign often responsibilities

and

cares

sleep,"is not

so

brief

the

heavy

General

"Uneasy

as

effect of

crown

care

pressingon

terms

Thus:

or

kind," is histories,no matter what

1

This

metaphor

the mind

head

shorter

is not

what,

disturb

that

his

wears

is assimilated

to

a

the

the head.

briefer, though

are

particular terms. of

on

lies the

"He.

than, he

recommended

less

devours "

Novels

devours

forcible,

literature, no or

them

for imitation.

sermons,

all."

Brevity.

38 47

A

a.

phrase

expressed by

be

may

word.

a

be forgotten,i.e. are indelible" never impressions can be is of such a nature The that it cannot style of this book i.e. unintelligible." understood, "These "

The

"of

words

inserted.

See

such

the

that"

nature

a

Sir Archibald

from

extract

often

are

unnecessarily

Alison.

brief (though often be used as Participlescan sometimes taining ambiguous) equivalents of phrases conConjunctions and Verbs. 48.

instances.

more

this

Sometimes

"though 49. used

he

retired."

the

doors,

our

"

contain

done]

was

So

that

"phrases

See (7) for heard) this, he advanced." "phrases containing conjunctions" means This, done, (for, when conjunctions."

he

(when

"Hearing

participle"being" is omitted. no sees danger nigh," for "France

he

"France

being"

Participles and participialadjectives may like Adjectives, as equivalents for phrases

"The

50. A

instead

could

write

not

statement of

taining con-

clamouring ocean," "the licence of inventingparticipial

"the

instances. drenching rain," are adjectivesby adding -ing to

poetry.

be

Relative.

nQver-ceasingwind,"

You

or

is."

France

the

at

"

The a

the

noun,

is almost

crannying

sometimes

may

being expressed

at

be

length.

restricted "

wind

to

in prose.

brieflyimplied Thus,

of

instead

was spiritof Christianity humanizing, and therefore "c.," or "Christianity, since it was (or being) of a humanizing spirit, write more briefly and can discouraged "c.," we effectively, "Gladiatorial shows first discouraged, and finally put were down, by the humanizing spiritof Christianity" So instead of "The of youth is thoughtless and sanguine,and therefore nature "c.," we can write, "The depreciated danger of the voyage was the of the island exaggerated by and the beauty natttre thoughtless of youth" "

The

Sometimes was

in vain

a

preferredby they were

by

mere

that the

hardy

mountaineers

all honest

name

or

he offered

men,

epithet implies a

the Swiss

terms

mountaineers" and

but

hardy.

the

i.e. "

Government

' *

The

: "

statement.

war

by

"It

deliberately

was

the Swiss, because

deed

affected

was

to

applauded treat

it

as

Brevity.

39

head

set

a

the

of

(him whom they called) the assassin" The conqueror of Ansterlitz might be expected to hold different language from the prisoner of St. Helena" i.e. Napoleon elated by the victoryof Austerhtz,"and "Napoleon when when depressed by his imprisonment at St. Helena." and

murder,

price upon

"

"

CAUTION.

Different

"

must

names

be

not

for the

used

same

unless

person

from its context. derives an Thus, if we appropriateness Charles be in very bad are taste writing about II., it would to avoid third repeating " he" by using such periphrasesas the following : "The each

of them

of the

Stewarts

fourth

year

forcible

certain

the

business," age," "c.

Conjunctions may

51. a

hated

of his

Monarch

Merry

be omitted.

abruptness,e.g.

"You

died

The this

say

in the

omission :

I

(on

fifty

gives

the other

hand) deny it." When

be

may

short, as

Macaulay's writings,conjunctions advantageouslyomitted.

sentences

are

is intended, the Where a contrast for the second of the two contrasted talks truthfully and

51

The

a,

conjunction but usually "

the way

prepares

is good but dull." of bid, the incongruity savours of epigram : " He " false." He is always amusing and prosily."

instead

is used

and

in

terms

He

:

Imperative Mood

for "if."

be used

may

Where

always

strip]Virtue of the awful authority she of mankind, and you rob her general reverence majesty."

"Strip (for,if you derives

from

of half

her

the

Apposition may

52.

into

sentences

called

"We of

"

than,

of

(1) the

a

person and, what This

"He

subject of

resided of

esteem

to, and

came

He

came

Such no

here

this

unemphatic words,

"This

often

a

is

such

Tautology. is

good friend

as

to

briefer

and

clear as,

by

several

verbs

for many

city,-and

condensation

several times

a

letters

not

repeating

verbs,

(2) the

prepositions.

or

years,

the

obscurity,there

54.

had

we

and, after he had won So, (2) "He citizens,(he) died," "c. induced to reside in, this city,"is shorter than

all

was

to

is more, is

effected

be

may

object of several

(i)

two

musician, "c."

common

common

the

was

to convert

as

to whom

a

of music,"

Condensation

53.

is

the house

students He

so

one.

introduction,a musician,

all young

"

at

used

be

"

a

as

The

was

causes

certain

induced

reside

and, obscurity, harshness

to, in, "c., fault

to

of

as

in

in it."

even

where

pausing

on

there

light,

in the first example.

repeating the

same

unnecessarilyis called tautology ', e.g. : circumstance it is circumstance a painful ;

word

that I

Brevity.

40 much

the

But

fault

the

mean

is

thing, that

such

that

is

a

"

the

of instances

are

is

judgment

unnecessary

the

Alison,

thirst for

conquests

ardent

an

universal

of

is

"

of

end

teristic charac-

a

"c."

Other

men;"

all

deceived

never

the

at

that

passion

opinion

it is

words

See, for

word.

same

Archibald

Sir

that infallible

so

the

arrange

no

a

greatly

slightlydifferent

in

repetitionof

It is

"The

"

will

is to be

may

meaning

burning

this nation.

there

event;

also

to

it is

stance painful circumstance, a circumwill cause him, deep regret."

from

"A

he

words

a

same

the

extract

Thus

book.

the

the

than

fault

is

and

me,

painful

a

remedy

true

that

different

by using is

regret, and The

This

repetitionof

examples,

as,

"This

manner

:

causes

worse

avoided

circumstance"

regret the

much

be

much

I

a

repetition,thus The

will

occurrence"

the in

words

to

not

same

circumstance lament

also

he

regret, and

"His

"c.

\

Parenthesis

55.

with

used

be

may

to

advantage

brevity. "We

have

we

a

Extreme

the

of

a

long

at

the

forcible

more

would

been

ment treat-

the

than

appended ?"

be offended

not

that

taken

be

let clearness

parenthesismay

a

sentence.

be the first consideration.

at beginners, not to aim so much Horace forcible, as at being perfectly clear. fall into I take pains to be brief, obscurity,"and fere of the rules for brevity interthat several seen

for

all events

It is best, at

being brief,

however,

meaning

and

indeed,

Who,

:

offended

be?)

parenthesishad

if the

"

Caution:

56.

not

is shorter

been

must,

care

obscure

not

have

sentence

separate

would

(and who received,"

would

sentence

in

all

are

or

While I says, be it may easily with the rules "

for

clearness.

of style springs from (i) vividness and (2) exactness and ness (2) exactthought, and from a corresponding (i) vividness Forcible

in the When

(1) and

describe

who

was

cut

of

use

words.

as

run

you the

If you before you,

it.

see

are

writing

man

writing about the capture of a city,was surrendered, starved out, or demolished surprised, Was routed,crushed, repelled,defeated, an army you

are

in the

(2) Exactness of

their

cannot

meanings be

discussed 1

See

and

differences.

here.

English

of words

use

is

a

about

a

it

man

executed,

If hanged? the city stormed, ? beforesurrender or

annihilated

exact

1

Lessons

see

?

knowledge and study by itself,

requiresan This

to

he

and

ask, was through the body, butchered, shot, or

killed,see

d"nvn,

endeavour

describing anything,

are

you it

for English People,

pp.

1-53.

EXERCISES

For cises

intended

are

A

of the

explanation

an

number

used,

be

to

(43), (40 d}, refers

e.g.

Letters

explanations

(iotf)

N.B. "

(10 a')

"

Rule

(36)

(37

estranged

"

had

(a)

2.

This

(a)

soon

the

(a)

purpose,

friend,"

of

the

naturally

which

(a) (40

(wrongly)

the

give

to "

Begin

to

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he

(a)

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by

by

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or

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to

particularly

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in

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be

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good

no

being

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restless"

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42

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44 1

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45

"Which"

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46 "

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in his remarks

this

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48 (a) (i)alludes distinctly

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and and

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32.

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pleasuresin which active. assent

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Find

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more

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to

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(a)

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" On his way, he visited 34. him had asked him to call upon

(54) (a) father,

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to

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exceedinglybeloved (43), who

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him."

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the host."

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magnificence

unprecedented\

and

Exercises.

49

quite kept up his Lordship's unrivalled reputation for and, thanks to the unequalledenergy of unparalleledhospitality, is rapidly becoming one Mr. effective of the most Smith, who with the toasts in the kingdom, a spirit were toast-masters given indeed of this and occasions nature were we on ; quiteunexampled

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37.

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lights

(14 a)."

(15 b] I think, gentlemen, you must confess that any one have done the same would (32),if you had been tempted

wasteful ragged among to acts of dishonesty luxury and comfort, deliberatelyinstigated had been from I infancyto love, (a) taught by those whom when I failed to mocked I when or stole, punished praised

then, placed starving and

was

(i$ a) do (b)so." (a)

Insert

another

infinitive

(b) Repeat

42.

refused

"

So to

far from

beside the verb

"love." instead

"Love"

being the first(54)aggressor,

prosecute

his

old

friend D

when

a

produces

dience." "obe-

so."

of "do

he not

favourable

(22)only oppor-

Exercises.

50

tunity presented itself for revenging also his friend's adviser,

but

suspected,if he

events

had

given "

"

43. and

them

.

Having spectacle of the

the

the

to

sentence

may

have

words

be

must

been,

altered.

all

at

events

qualify "suspected,"

apex of the

sun-rise, I found

Righi

to

enjoy the

incommoded

myself

so by a emerged from the hotel I determined to quit them at the therefore, without stopping to

who

had

that (a)(i)similar purpose, earliest practicable period ; and partake of breakfast,I wended my for

the

that he

of illiterate individuals

number

If

.

.

climbed

"

coming danger, and

paid 5^. per day to English navvies, navvies." preferenceto 2s. 6d. to French

6s., (19) in

44.

(a) at

"suspected."

after

It is quitetrue

even

."

suspected

place

him, all (23)

upon

Smith the

of

his friend

innocent

however

Smith

know

qualifies"Smith,"

all events"

Yet,

Smith.

John

not

thus

of it."

information

no

If "at

(a)

did

himself

a

back

way

with

possible

all

celerity." (3) "

{a}

"

45.

same."

the

that miracles

admit

You

and is wrong, is unnatural unnatural, it follows are

alliance

the

(a) Indian (a)

is the

"Who

46.

Insert

of

defence

of

or

other

are

dared

the

disputed

our

antithetical

some

has

Now

whatever

cles admission, mirawrong." (i)

own

your miracles

that

inhabitant

(a) (41)

the

since, by

that

man

natural.

not

are

call into

to

woods,

to

civilized

delegate to the

rights?

epithets.

of those who (a) very (n) small proportion indeed 47. "A have attempted to solve this problem (b)(19) have succeeded in a plausiblesolution." obtaining even (a) State

what in

one

48.

"

proportion succeeded, or, if you like,what hundred." all those that (b) Begin, "Of

suddenly (a) (47 a) brought

which

(8)

forces

submit

into

failed

:

"

not

"c."

contact

with

a

wholesale

imposture, naturally repels (a) being (40 a) barbarously ill-treated^

system and

be

To

a

to

one

to

to

(15 a) one." "

causes a (a) Write, either (i) Collision one (2) "When brought into contact. is emphatic), (3) "One (if"ill-treatment" or "c." collision with by

natural

....

.

49.

"

We

a

annex

to the

Editor

letter

which

the

editor

has

.

recentlyaddressed

of the

appeared undertaken

repulsion," ot

is naturally repelled," is naturally repelled

by

Mr.

's direction

in contradiction ,

equally untrue,

which

.

in to

that

of statements, periodical,and (a] (9)

insert

in the

next

number.

Exercises.

52 54. "A

life,and, the

(a) (10 d}

man

immersed

in

neglected the ordinary duties

who

himself

study,devoted

grand plans

to

of for

(b) (44) and refused to provide for the of those dependent on him, and suffered his aged relatives to wants because he would become not help them, (c)would, in my paupers benefit

mankind,

of

opinion, (34) be

bad

a

and

man,

altogether(d) (40 a)

not

without

hypocrisy." "

(a)

If

"

55.

"or

who

are

(d)

believe

have

may

been

he."

"

I cannot

whatever has

(b) " if he refused,"

man."

a man

a

shown

"

to

in the

while

extent

a

he

(c) " such

refused."

hypocrite."

guilt of (a)

said to the

been

"

or

some

(b} (10 e) who, be shown, and

one

contrary,

can

testimony proceeding from those examined the facts, in spite(23)of carefully

by competent

said to have

res'sted

all attempts consult his own

have

many

to obstacles,

leave

his situation,("r) (29) to of his own." a business

(29) induce

to

interests

him

and

to

(29)

to

establish

(a)

"

his

"c (b) (i) " for, whatever that, in spite of "c., he resisted."

guilt;"

"c. .

obstacles"

spite. "

write

"

We

.

between

"have"

of

purpose

and

consult

to

seek

must

consulting his

for the

own

.

interests

originof

can

be

shown

by

(2) insert "in "carefully." (c) (i) Or

establishing." by establishing"c."

and

.

.

it

and

.

the

"for

56.

.

.

(2)

Or

freedom, (a)(37)prosperity, only (b}that x portionof our our

(a) (37)glory,in that and The annals, (30) though it (c]is sterile and obscure. lish great Eng(d) then formed ; the national (e)disposition people was began which it has since (e) ever (d) then to exhibit those peculiarities and our fathers (d) then became possessed; emphaticallyislanders, and and (a) manners, (f) in their politics, (30 a) not (a) feelings, and

merely in

their

(a) Repeat

geographicalposition." the Pronominal

the

thus

sentence : by beginning "c." (^) "It was (c)Omit. marked words implying something more more forcible than "possessed;" in the (/) Repeat "islanders."

annals

our

57. "(0) He knew him, and

the universal

was

cemented

the

Adjective. (b) Express

that"

many

"

"

emphatic only portion of

It is in that

then

than

that "c." "

(e)Use "

disposition,and

latter case,

"retained."

(54)favouriteof'(54)all (8)who friendshipsat this period,(a) (33)

highest circle of society,and, as he (b} (50) had (moving ture), a (4 a) certain property, being independent of the profitsof literain the

and which

at

soon

the

foundations

completely extinguished the outset

of his

x

his

career

had

threatened

of slander to

sap

the

reputation." in

"c."

Show

that

Rule

That

-which

(a) Begin "Moving "c."

of

breath

treats

(") "rendered (14)is violated

independent of by the metaphors.

of the thirteenth

.

century.

.

.

.by

.Exercises. "

58. the

The

brief

reached

outward

and

period which

material

been

of that

form

citywhich, during

(10 a) is comprised in

the

highest pitch of this (a) (15) nature.

was

53

present book,

our

and military,artistic,

of

The

of

progress

literary glory, (b) (5)first has

the

already traced." with (a) Begin the sentence "military glory." "

59.

The

detachment

"Such

only

not

of their numbers

and

capture the small after some was,

force

was."

"

(b) By

the

failed to take the

the weakness

of the

that

was encamped sharp fighting,driven back

first" is meant

fort,(30) spite

also to but garrison, outside the town, and with

inconsiderable

loss." Point

the

out

"the

60.

ambiguity.

it

Remedy

by inserting either

"

which,"

or

assailants."

"(a) (b} Believing that these reforms can only (c] (21) be for and that (5)this will is as publicopinion them, prepared

effected be

more

or

less advanced

in different

localities,the Bill of the a (3) considerable period vSession of Parliament, next in regard to the points above-

has Association, (a) (31) in draft, and will be introduced in the provides for placing (d} (3) the control in the (3) hands mentioned 0/~the ratepayers which

power be

to

been

for

locality ; the exercised to be through representativeLicensing Boards elected periodically by them."

{a)

Place

the

parenthesisfirst,as

of the Association

has

of each

independent

an

been

sentence

"

:

The

Bill

"

Parliament

is noun (b) What ("r)"effected qualifiedby "believing?" Write " In the belief." in accordance with public opinion,which only so* far as they are "c." shall (d) "it,or, the Bill provides that the ratepayers .

.

.

.

receive

control

and .

61.

"I

.

shall exercise

.

.

this control."

.

think

they are very (i) nice persons, for they kept me a long (a) (ll) time togetheryesterday by their (i) nice,stories all about what they(b}have experiencedin Japan, where had been for they (a) ever so long, and (c] (43) where they said that the natives ripped up their (d) (5) stomachs."

amused

for

(a) Mention other

62.

"

To with

that which (a) A

63. of

some

"

"

"

or (3) experiences things,they told us "c." ("")"their

for

contend a

dislike

increases,(30) however

of

"

time.

some

one

compound

has

(c)"

among

own."

garded advantageous monopolies, which are rewhich and a daily (10 a) suspicion (a)

natural once

Upon enteringthe my

it may

be

to be

possessed,(15 a)

adjective can

refreshment,

adventures."

be

rustic nerves

annoyed

at

the loss

is useless."

used, including "daily."

place of were

entertainment

horrified

partake by lightingon a to

Exercises.

54

species singing some simultaneouslyimbibing that cup which, if individuals

of boisterous

number

of harvest

song, and also inebriates cheers,

who

were

from their societyby when, banished of the fragrant weed, I wended to the apartthe fumes ment way my had the in which I which one adjoined hoped to rest my of the fairer sex, found I assortment an limbs, interesting weary who were holding a separate confabulation apart from the revels it

of

their

"

rougher

spouses.

"village inn," "next See (3).

Write

"

64.

; and

room," "c.,

absurd

these

for

cutions. circumlo-

born, in 1782, Napoleon Burgoyne was boys (il)."

When

lington Wel-

and

both

were

Mention Brienne, Wellington at Eton. this, and, " WelArthur imply the boyhoody call Wellington

studied

Napoleon in

order

at to

lesley."

65. near

me

I

whom

(38) to

"

gratefulhomage

most

forgotten : virtues,and (52) can "

(a) Though

of the

yet "transitory,"

for

"To

neat

and

in the

"

for hour,

(b)

and

clean

"

this

artisan

the British

see

"

for

"

of

ephemeral" "

time, and for day. told "c."

the

on

children

the open

under

has

his wife

and their

cheerful,with

themselves (a) (19) disporting

moment

gentleman

most

is (52) the first of

short

a

the

of vice."

cause

for

day"

use

be

to

and

mute

are

recognized expression

a

to

live

prudence

longer, is objectionable. Write

a

future 66.

is

day"

us

that

used

be

never

will

but

all of

that

us

or

not

(a) hour when (b)(38) has told you

of

admiration

occasion, merely to the

upon entrusted

(a) day,

the

the

this

abilities

are

ones,

any

subject,(36) feelings of

this

on

of

perishable eloquence

on

can

is now, I believe, without refer occasion

who

mine,

(38) whose

;

former

some

upon

of

never

respect, and,

feelings of as

friend

honourable

"An

by

canopy

write

Sabbath,

their

of

hour"

Else

sides,

heaven,

is

(l$)pleasant." (a)

There

is

whether "

or

reasonable

no

he

ground

it clear

makes

context

;

for

but since

mistaking

the

sense

Shaftesbury

Lord

was

here, as the questioned '*

disporting to qualify artisan and his wife " porting disand, by their sides,their children "

meant

write

children," "c."

67.

"Even

if

such it is the

the

of

all the

(a)

called

more

intention

Omit "

(a)

it

"

that

it were."

author

deserve

of was

seem

in

one

(c) word,

"

that (c] it

was

perpetrating(e)it,to

possible,upon "

stances, extenuating circumreprobation,(b} and

severe

crime, in

the

(") " which."

of the crime

with

it would

for because

author

misery

attended

were

would

conduct

to

his victim." have

been."

("?)Use

the

See

the flict in-

($).

(*/)Express noun.

Exercises. 68. been

"The

of the heavenly bodies have must (a) (i) observance with great difficulties, before the (b)(30) telescope

attended

(a) (i)discovered, and

was

55

of astronomers

it is not

to

be wondered

gations at if the investi-

often

and failed to unsatisfactory, under these produce complete (a) (i) persuasion, (30) (15, a) disadvantages."

(a) What

is the

were

difference

"discover" "

(") Begin

between

"observance"

"invent,"

and

Before

"persuasion"

"

in

reaching a help, and (a) (35) was

for

Sir

became

John Burgoyne himself, face of the difference

(a)(i) conscious Sebastian

of San

weak

very

woman poor at last hauled

with (30)not content he and dangerous struggle, that was crying piteously safelyto shore."

more,

put and remedy the ambiguity by inserting writing." who," according to the meaning.

"

with

compared

is the exact (a) What repeating the

to

Metz

meaning

or

by

Todleben,

the fortifications

between

(10 e) was

(c)(12)

Paris."

or

the relative, (b) Avoid by weakness itself." (c) conjunction,

of conscious

?

"

with

name,

"he"

face with

Sebastopol, (b} which

of

and

observation,"

"conviction"?

Point

(a)

70.

and

"

"c."

He 69. plunged into the sea once his previous exertions. After a long succeeded

and

a

Upon Richard's leavingthe (c)stage, the Commonwealth which Cromwell had was (a) again set up ; and the Parliament broken was brought together; but the army and they fell into new again (a) broken by the army : and upon disputes: so they were like to fall into (b) (n) great convulsions." that the nation was "

71.

Eng., "broken question whether

Modern

(a)

a

is that that

regarded

as

the

"

with

.

retired

What

(a) (n) and

weapons,

way.

"

See

(18)and

unnecessary ended with

the

Commonwealth a

dispute

"c. with

"c.,

it

(43).

in the

militaryprofession!

He

began

(b) (li) inefficient formality, and (c}(b) (n) greatly improved fire-arms "

pipe-clay." (6) "Six-pounders and flint-locks" are loaders." compared with "twenty-four-pounders and breechantithetical to (a),perhaps (c) Something is wanted

drill"

"

or

open

order."

fear death in the same fear to go in the dark. Men is increased fear of children by tales. So is the fear

Children The

when

but, fallinginto

inefficient

"loose

73.

"

....

revolution

(a) "pig-tailand now

and ....

.

a

the Parliament Commonwealth, are on a stage." But this is extremely the principal subject : " When

the

puppets Parliament

....

was

."

.

many

Make

Parliament

was

72.

Richard,

so

doubtful. Richard

"

Richard

asserted

up." (b) "violently convulsed." (c) It is The metaphor is in good taste. ing meanfrom It might be retired public life."

this

56 of

Exercises. death.

and

contemplation of death,

passage a tribute

tions

due

death

on

the

as

world, is holy and

another

to

it, as -

The

religious.The

In nature, is weak. mixture is sometimes

unto

there

of

'wages

sin,'

fear of

religious meditavanity and of

of

superstition." Insert connecting adverbs

"I

have

often

or

heard

him

(44).

See

conjunctions. reiterate

(54) repeatedlythat he never to him, path was again, if a safe(54) and secure open prefer the perilous (54) road of danger, however alluring (54)and 74.

would

attractive "

75-

might be."

the latter I

whether

thought

I did

not

in my observe

dream

remarked

bold

atom

take

that if any

from

friend

my

in the

me

of the

of the birds

one

of

heap

asked

in the conduct

curious

anything

pigeons, I (a) (4 a) to

that when

was

so

midst

ot grain them, (31) (which (b) a detachment guarded, and which, being increased and continually never useless),all the eaten, seemed rest turned againsthim and pecked him to death for the (c)(50) as

an

a

action." (a) Point

the

out

and

(") This

ambiguity.

"

parenthesis. of them, guarded by not

as

.

useless

"

come

noticed

Being

.

.

yet." (c)

:

earlier in the sentence, a heap of grain in the midst to all appearcontinually ance, ,

should

I

a

.

.

.

theft."

"

76. If this low view of the royal office becomes generally adopted, then sovereigns who (8) have manded always hitherto comthe will of fall into Englishmen by degrees respect disrespect.'' Point

out

the

ambiguity.

Show

it

how

might

be

removed

(a) by punctuation,

(") by altering "who." "

77.

I struck

magistrate. to

the

such

would

rightto

do

78.

(44). "He

perseverance

believe

not

Insert

a

explainedthis

Witnesses

me.

prison. exercised is.ararely me

right that

were

to

to

the

called He in

I remonstrated." adverbs.

conjunctions or connecting

attained and

It is

I

committed

He

this.

circumstances. See

in self-defence.

man

statements.

support my

had

the

He

a

common

distinguishedpositionby

very

sense,

which

mere

(15)

(52) (10 a] qualitiesare

perhaps mostly underrated, (30) though and not remarkable for general ability.

he

was

deficient

in tact

"

"

79. may

crime

be

which VindictivenesS) defined

but

as

anger

(a) (50) is a fault, (b) and (10 a) which is caused not by sin

by personal injury,ought

to

be

which

nor by carefullydistinguished

Exercises. from

which

resentment,

(49) which

is natural

unjust,because "The

(a)

it is

fault

is anger and which (a) (50) is a virtue,(!"} (c) right caused by an act (d) which is it is inconvenient." unjust,(300) not because and

;" yindictiveness

of

"

(c) *' Right

Omit,

(ft)"an

can.

57

virtue

of resentment." "

adjective,but

an

as

(b) righteous''

injustice."

of

act

"the

be used

cannot

"

80.

(a)He told his friend that (a)his brother was surprisedthat (a] ^hadlgiven so small a contribution,for (a] he was (b) (12) a rich in of his and losses bad state the recent (a) spite man, very of trade, (19) (30) compared with himself."

81.

"

citizen him

What

See

(b)

citadel

it be

must

.

universal

had

been

daylightby

a

been

This

address

the citizens been

captured in

the

and

enemy, admitted by

"

the

As

into

two

citadel

.

.

.

had

of

end

: .

The citadel

"The

"The

.

."

been

provided un-

postern gate,

a

;" or, Else, if one captured "c." .

broad

those

sentence.

a

sentences

therefore

Naturally captured

.

been

the

at

come

that the

was

tence sen-

had

opinion. be

sentence

surpassed all those who were living(a) at the in which he could him in the forcible(b} manner appeal to the popular sympathy, and in the ease towards could draw (a) himself the hearts of his

author

with

(c]an

which

with

.

.

for it had

used, write

must

converted

be

captured

...

of

number

"

"betrayed

case

time

(54)opinion of all

small

may

same

.

scaling ladders, and wearied by a long march."

much

any

"

?"

.

(15) betrayed,(30) having

very

with and

83.

proverbial for wealth?

was

(40).

"The

In

king

to (a) crucifyz. Roman (a) (15 b] It must be indeed wrong if to (b} (32) slay one is almost parricide,to (") scourge and him is an outrage. bind monstrous to a crime, (b} "

(a]

(15 a)

Asian

"

is

82.

(6). (b) What

Use

(a)

he

readers." (a) Express

84. a

the

the

great

statesman

quicksands

safe harbour

of

world.

It would

(a)

be

well

Trade

to

literal statement

"

The

; and

lawless

even

(15)

literalize

must

ministers

(43) (51) because were

He

of Protection

Free

of commerce, and pillar guided or impelled the people and false political to economy

indeed

was

(c) Omit.

with."

"force

a

(a)(14 a]

saved

the

country

millions."

several

85.

(b)

word,

one

in the financial

star

from

This

"

in

be

preceding metaphors.

changed

were

most

the

boldest

and

the

into

unwillingto of

them

desperate]had

Else

the

metaphor.

a

meet

(though too

much

the

Houses, (a)

their counsels value

for

his

Exercises.

58

unlawful

the

resorting to

had

that

of extortion

modes

of

think

(b) (li) personal safety to

familiar

been

to

(r) (12) the

ceding pre-

age." (a) Begin

Lawless and desperate though their of these (c) Insert some (b) "neck." modes, "benevolences, ship-money, and the other "c."

had

counsels unlawful

86.

"

We

may his poetry. "

of the

command.

(a)

writer

and

That "

We

will

"

87.

guess" and emphatic, (b) "Marah."

pretend be

to

captain asked

(15 a) scorn,

completely at intended

are

fiftymen,

a

his

dry."

never

was

despair"

allowed

be

to

"

in

eloquence of

(a) (15) despair (15 a] fountain (b} (12) of bitterness

to

The

Byron,

grandchildren

our

exhibited

as

the whole

had

ever

what

so

not

author

Lord

of

character

No

misanthropy,

"c."

been

(a) (15)pretend'toguess

will not

think

"

with

sentence

new

a

by

the

supply of

hundred and food, and (44) The one fifty breech-loaders. have general repliedcoldly that he could not let his subordinate forced The he that wanted. (a) (4) anything (44) captain was to out set (34) with an insufficient force, spite of the superabundance of soldiers doing nothing in the camp (34),and with by a general who from the first put in his way every obstacle had resolved not to give him even ordinary assistance, (b} (10 a') which

the

(a)

captain had

Point

and

out

which and

"

I

have

.

attractions

no

difference "

"

or

(b)Write, according ". .

.

.

a

resolution

to

the

that."

a

is not

(a) What

.

that

practicalman, and disbelieve in everything (8) amuse philosophers practical; theories (a) which

am

pedants

ambiguity,

the

assistance .

anticipated."

time

some

remove

".

meaning, 88.

for

"

that

in

for the

the

for me, would

meaning "

second

(30)for

which"

be

this reason"

caused

by

the

use

of

?

discovery drew no other seventy but the and the (n a) passing a sentence (li a) turning (a) him out of office, (b) condemning him to die for it (31) (which was presently and he restored to his after short confinement pardoned, was a all men believed that the king knew of the letter,(c)(43) liberty), and that (6 b} the pretended confession of the secretary was only collusion to lay the jealousiesof the king's (d] (n a] favouring him, (30) notwithstanding (e)(43) which still hung upon popery, his (e} writing on the Revelation, and his (e) affecting to enter all occasions into controversy, (e)asserting in particularthat on

89.* "Yet,

the

Pope

when

Antichrist."

was

(a) "expulsion that

from."

was

Begin it

that

was

a

soon new

"

(b)

sentence

said, 'was

pretended

a

manifested "

:

"c.'"

by 'The

sentence

his pardon

to

death

and

a pretence liberation." (c) "

secretary's pretended confession,' '* the the suspicion that king

(d)

Exercises.

60 94.

regret that I have

"I

which (a) (3) intelligence

some

which

and

(ioa)fs

tell you

I must

at once, of a most ($}painful nature, it should of your I like to account (40 on (c) a] defer though (b] had because (c} (40 a] you have already ill-health,and many the natural dislike which and to (8) a troubles, (40 a] owing is unpleasant. friend must always feel to say that (10 f) which Many old friends in this district have turned against you : I faithful to : only (21) I remain scarcely like to write the words sure you will believe you, and I am interests." which is best for your "

(a)

(3) In

news." if

a

a

is

period

letter these

and

"because because

of

...

remain

of your ."

come

they

is

(iof)

that

doing

am

(30)

must

....

I

should

words

desired, they

(c) Write troubles

that

;

are

last, after

ill-health

but

"

pleasant." un-

and

the

....

back word that the enemy had sent general at once other the side of the river,and [(35)or (37)] suddenly appeared on have shown // would then (a) retreated, (b} //was that(/;) thought

95.

"The

his (3) part if he had attacked the (c) (i) fortitude on tenable than which for week not were a more (d} fortifications, the (54) universal Such at all events. was opinion, at (23) least, of (54) all the soldiers." more

Point

(a)

the

have shown (b )"It was thought he would ambiguity, and fortitude (c) Distinguish between (d) "bravery." be if " that " for would the substituted were meaning

out

"c."

"

What "which"? "

"

96.

since

A

It will

Who so

morose

are

"

has

this

attained"

powerful that, unless

who less

are

liable

Ministry Write

?

it is

"

of

"which,"

these

go

"and

on,

that

this notion

has

(a)

it

become

." .

.

.

habituallysilent (a) (3) by dispositionand to

the

fault

are habitually (a) (3) fond (3) a pleasant disposition"

Each

is to

dispersed

who

(a)

for

has

what

"Those

97.

substitute

to

sprung up that the Premier, though he can has and attained influence which an govern,

notion

or

better

perhaps

they. "

legislate,cannot it imperative, if renders should be dispersed." (a)

be

"

periphrases

must

of

exaggerating than those of talking, and (40 a] of (a)

be

condensed

into

a

jective. single ad-

author, (a)(31) though he is not (b}altogether(^guiltless of which to be of are (c)faults exaggeration, in those found in his latest works he (d) which as as plentifully his when he was career as an author, yet, published beginning all who those these were surpassed (e)defects, notwithstanding living

98.

This

(b} occasional

61

Exercises. at the

he

(/)

could,

it were,

as

in the

and

see

power which he drew

with "who

the

could

not

that

power

a

(g) manner

clear

into the feelingsof indeed

toward

(/)

perused his works"

(f) (a)

"

in the

him

with

time

same

the

himself (54).

See

in which

people be (f)

large,

at

resisted

sympathy

"

"

of those

(") One of these parenthesisinto a separate sentence. dense One of these is unnecessary, (if)Con(":) words these as (e) Omit unnecessary. word, (g) clearness with." {f) Express all this in one the

Convert

is unnecessary. earliest." "his :

words

"

"

the North

Among

99. heard

of the

rushed

from

perpetrationof similar the

room

his tale half told, Make

(a)

it evident

American

whether

Indians,

his

use

his

regiment, out inspiredevery one "

Begin,

Out

he

"

101.

right of

who

were

"

that" repetitionof be replaced by some

is

can

"

102.

in the

It

happened

House

being

who

Point

out

the

day before, (19)

Though

wounded

had

shown

then

officer his

(a) that

"c and

.

must

there

"

have

(10 b] will

forgive the

fill."

to

suit what

were

."

.

.

intelligence(b) (18)

objectionable. Use other conjunction to

not

been

officer left in

only

considerations

that at this time

(8) could

had

Prime

"

(b} "and precedes.

few

a

be

and

Radicals

Minister

for

"

Christian.

a

he

(41) other

as

and

the

the

"

"c

are selectingan weight when we that will task in a placed position his fidelity"

(a) The

alive

and

in the recent

charge time

the

was

bravery

The

last the

at

and

arm,

"

well

as

the

stood,

lived the North among is " horror-stricken."

who

painful operation

wounded

officers

twenty headed."

Moral

heading

he

his crime"

at

once

show

this

admiration.

of

had

in

twenty

with

speaker

under

"His(i) bravery (I )fortitudehe had shown action, (30) though he was to

the

not, and

or

indeed

I had

where

wretch

(30) horror-stricken

100.

unable

Indians

atrocities ; but it seemed tolerabl inin a civilized land : and I

things should occur at once, leaving the

that such

with

(a) (23) American

difference

of

meaning, according

as

we

read

"who"

or

"that."

103. of and were

"//

cannot

would

men

be doubted be

left poor

and indisposition, taken

out

imaginations as (a) The

one

minds

(a) would,

(which original)is

meaning in the

"

to

vain and

the

minds

of

things,full

shrunken

unpleasing

of men's

the

'(15b] that

themselves,

of if

false

opinions, (15 a) like"

a

vast

melancholy (32) there valuations,

cannot

easily be

castles

in the air/' "pleasant fancies."

more

ber num-

tersely expressed

than

62

Exercises. "

104. His

God

ordinaryworks

mind

atheism

to

religion. (44)

to

scattered, it the chain

in

men's

While

may

acknowledge

the mind

confederate

atheism

of

to

(44)

That

school

which

clearly demonstrates

most

back

second causes upon when it beholds ; (44) together,it must needs

them

linked

and

minds

looks

man

in

rest

Providence.

a

of

a

philosophy brings

sometimes

of them

accused

refute it. (a) A

depth

:

miracle

refute atheism, because little philosophy inclines man's

wrought

never

the

is most truth

of

"

religion. (a)

Insert

"

suspensive conjunction.

a

See

(34).

The

spiritof Liberty and the spiritof Nationalitywere for all dead for a time once a pious duty, ; (a) (5) it might be but it could continue not always expedient or (c) (15) "(18) to (b}(13) mourn profitable (c)(15 a) for their loss. Yet this is the (b}(13)feelingof the age of Trajan." 105.

(a)

Omit.

(b)

Notice

by

"

"

by the

this

force

(a)

of

with

most

in

(a)

"

a

it to have

find for

dead

.

.

one,

To

or

the

a

"

sentence:

new

the

ball ; to

It

occasion,

was

a

force

"c."

description

amused

himself

of

inferior

authors

as

a

an

the

"

have

(d) What

done"

is the word

with

"

a

the

for "that central

some

passed (a)(3) in

write

and

by writing

sentence

"like

some

authors." instead

poet which

of

....

happens

around

object?"

manner self-satisfied own

through course

againstthe

; to

tide

the sole title to

English ministers a peculiarart of (d} sporting of a nation's destiny heavy, the awful responsibility jaunty grace of a juggler (I l) (e)playing with his golden have joked and intrigued,and bribed and (/) deceived^

distinction

with

(b) generations

many

their of office,letting things take years never have sagacity, (b} sailed with consummate of popular (c]judgment ; to have left on record as the

been

tempest."

in connection

have

twenty

with

of the force

nature

Longinus highlyrecommends because (a) (5)(c]he has not

poet." (3) Omit has."

"

the

was

almost

(b) Begin

upon

(c) Suspend

108.

"to

than

mentions,

he

The

.

therefore, by

emphatic

more

effected, (a) we

was

words,

raging of

the

it evident

are

(b} (15 a) have done, (30) but (c) has gathered together those (a1)(I ) events which are apt to terrifythe imagination,and (35) reallyhappen

whom he

because the

these

little fancies

genius,

words

(15 b) what

seemed

by Homer,

storm

a

had

I remember

"

Make

sentence.

these

(c) shown

theology."

Omit

107.

next

ask

we

change

that

of

"(38)

"

or

"c."

(a) If

which

the

by their grave;" "attitude." profitable are emphatic, as is

weeping

expedient

position,that

mourn

"

sit

"

in

yet

their

106.

"To

that

among

Exercises.

having done nothing (g\ (h) either for the indeed he did worse religion(for (/')which

result of

the

with

for (h} or nothing), (h}

for

or

basis

miserable

on

for the honour

science, (h} or

prosperityof

which

the

the

poor, than

or

cord con-

nation, (38) is surely

reputationof

man great (15) states-

a

(15 a] founded"

be (k)

can

and

art

the financial

even

or a

63

implies will and effort: use a word (") "Sail" (a) "complacently." to as a to contrast helpless ship, so peculiar paradoxically with sagacity." (c) Use a word implying less thought and is too often write deliberation. ing" "bearrepeated; (rf) With introduce the illustration as to so abruptly, (e) "tossing." word of a implying a particular kind deceit," not (/) Use the but to next (g) Insert the word "lying." "lying," thing with a preceding and intensifying adverb, "absolutely nothing." either," "or," repeat (/") Instead of nothing." (i) The parenthesis breaks the Write than rhythm. "nothing, or worse nothing." (k) to found." "

"

"

"

"

(i)conscious that glance at the clock will make you in the I therefore ask it is nearly three morning, and you, of this instead to time, wasting more gentlemen, question put to yourselves, Are or are we not, here, for the purpose we, truth ? of (l) eliminatingthe "

109.

A

'

' "

member, so far speech of the Right Honourable from unravelling (14) the obscurities of this knotty question, is eminently calculated to mislead his supporters (a) (Sa) who have be (b)(23) almost asserted It may made not a specialstudy of it. he has made that the very of every statement (8) which (i) "The

no.

is the fact."

converse

(a)

meaning

The

to

appears

be,

"

who : supporters is so grrat that that" his "

111.

provisions of

of the

Parliament

Point

out

"

the

Mrs.

vote

in the

(a) Substitute 113. "The cloud of evil

his

"all

supporters," but of writing "his

convenience

I should

be

the

of Canada

disposed

to

use

await and

"these

of

supporters "that." (6)

juxtapositionof

"

almost."

(8) require the

treaty which

meaning conveyed by which,

its

assembling."

by

that.

(26),in opposition to the been a reaction of the press, that (a) there had suffrage,that there had reallybeen a gain of

Smith

demonstrated

House

of

general dictum against woman's one

not

not

asserted,"requires the

"The

consent

112.

Every,"

"

the

"

instead

Commons."

of," and

erase

the

second

"

practiceof smoking hangs like the country." over

that."

a

gigantic(14 a)

EXERCISES.

CONTINUOUS

CLEARNESS.

THE

exercises

following

Butler,

and

other and

lost.

this, and the

the

is

It

The

the

that

necessary in mind

bear

altered

in

that

of

the

student sole

to

will

style,

author's

the

old-fashioned

the

view

a

version

unity

of

Burnet,

with

modernized

charm of

pleasant ring

highly

should

and

ambiguity. the to original

respects.

from

extracts

The

obscurity and necessarily be inferior some

of

modernized

Clarendon,

remove

in

consist

and

duality, indivi-

English, should is

object

are

recognize show

to

how

been clearly expressed. more might have have been not altered, being in as Occasionally expressions themselves obscure or objectionable, but as indicating a habit of in the which For beware. extract beginners should example, from is often in the he because, altered, not Burnet, particular because the but Burnet' obscurity, s context, presents pronoun any habit of repeating he is faulty. in These exercises used The be two can pupil may ways. either be have his book and the for on questioned reasons open each have versions, he may alteration, or, after studying the two the original version dictated and he then to him, reproduce may the parallel version, or like it, on something paper. in each

meaning

case

LORD The

principal (43),

use

(5),

pronouns

faults

in

CLARENDON. this for

phrases

of

excessive

style words

separation

long heterogeneous

are,

(47 a), ambiguous

of

words

tences sen-

of

use

grammatically

nected con-

together (19). ORIGINAL

It

(44) tinent

(50)

The

be

not

place

to

the

constitution

original metaphor the

it is better

is

metaphor to

avoid

the

in

now,

plain,

this

VERSION.

far

as

as

prodigious

an

present

take

place

in

of both

and

how

the*

to

uses so

And

imper-

discourse,

this

and

temper

PARALLEL

unnatural

present in

Though

will

nor

down

1

VERSION.

common

appearance

set

the

crown

as

as

scarcely

of

confusion.

a

which

prop, to

be

order

to

ex-

possible, how alteration so

short

a

royal seems

regarded

as

so

could

time, power

a

confusion.

a

metaphor,

Clearness.

Parliament, and (34) court itself, (30) that (5)

of

the

to

it may be the less wondered at, that so prodigiousan alteration should

(37) the

time, and

itself

appear

were

fallen

neither

follows

the

only

of

of

the to

or

and

of Church

or

were

set

the

the

on

all

foot

to

the

all that

We

sometimes

.overeign," "the

a

for

the for

the

to

intention

no

Church

was

to

State.

or

from

the

very to

necessary conceivable

every

sort re-

device

of perverting purpose honest bellion. majority into re-

With

They were dangers that and

the

some,

addressed

not

that

the

this

appeal was

their

to

patriotism.

warned that

the

"of

[all

threatened

precious in]the liberty of the property subject,

was

if the

laws

subservient

to

government deed, In-

country.

be doubted

in

outset, it

if

feel

to

great affection constitutional

Consequently,

for

court,

loyal respect and

alteration

their

say, brieflybut then temper," "c.

the

the peace of the kingdom make considerable any

to

or

ous preci-

of wisdom

whose

majorityhad

break

(43)

Commons

men

many

ancient

the

front the

subject(19) in

were

most

tions inven-

was

of

it cannot

to

Lords.)

House

of

liberty and their property, by tering overthrowing (47 a) or overmasthe law, and jecting (47 a) subit to an arbitrary (47 a) and by countenancing power, Popery to the subversion of the Protestant religion,"and then, 1

court

judgment high posed position and great wealth disdifference them, in spiteof their in-

the

ment govern:

the

king,

(15) beginning to work upon (5) them, and (n) corrupt (5) them, (43) (45) by suggestions "of the dangers (8) which threatened

the

and

a

dom, king-

State

(18)

of Parliament,

of

of

to

able consider-

any

alteration

therefore

mind

no

in

Houses also

House

there

plentiful

of

peace make

of both

In

(7) being possessed

had

who

men

the1

present composition, not

and

the

Commons

unfortunes,though they were the devoted to court, enough (19)had all imaginable duty for affection to the the king, and established (47 a) government by law or ancient custom ; (43) and without the doubt, major consisted that body (54) part of

break

of

but

descriptionof

and

great

nity, dig-

itself.

of wisdom

persons gravity,who

able un-

naturally,

most

account

(47 a)

a

of

House

support

temper

port sup-

to be

as

itself,its

it comes

some

majesty,

own

many

and

will be where

a

low

so

its faithful servants, it of use to set down here,

or

faithfulto it.

(Here In

so

would

who

those

nor

its

nor

short

crown

that it could

low,

so

in

made

be

fall

could

of

Houses

Popery the

to was

to

were

be

made

despotism, to be

subversion

and

encouraged of

the

testant Pro-

religion.'* perhaps idiomatically, the "

then

66

Continuous

Exercises.

by infusing terrible apprehensions into some, and their fears, upon

ing work-

so

(6b) "of in called ( 1 1 a] being question for somewhat had done," they stand by which (5) they would in need of (5) their protection ; and (43) (45) raisingthe hopes of others, that, by concurwith a) (5) them ring (47 (5) "

they should

be

offices

honours

and

of

there

were

too

misled

and

temptations

than

fierceness

barbarityof their

and

(19) no

had

they

court

and

;

government vested,nor (47 a) was had

who

would

then

done,

stand

in

of

those who help them this giving In others, timely warning." and were hopes excited, offices, were

now

and

out

preferments the

as

were

of adhesion.

reward

many there

that

malice

against the

had

tracted con-

the Church the

and

leaders

of

not conspiracywere many. flock was missive, large and subbut the shepherds

The

the

their

barbarity

they

But

court.

the

needed than

temptation

by

tions, tempta-

some

fierceness and

the

of

indeed

the

and

of these

were

very

few.

were

lead,

to

multitude

a

were

disposed

was

other

led away

were

many other

or

the absolute

authority (13) (13)

were

had

they

of the

innate

and

the

though

need

no

the

against ber (43) yet the numgreat of those in

not

was

rest

they

and

contracted

againstthe Church

there

and

one

other

from

natures,

own

malice

whom

something

others

needed

the

for

Too

corrupted many these several by

temptations, (40 a) who

(47 a)

others

"There appealed to. was "that danger," so1 it was said, they might be called to account

held

any

of

preferment." Though

kind

and

and

fears

honours,

obtain

to

sure

The

to

follow.

(44)(30) Mr. Pym

of greatest experience in parliaments,where

the

as

upon

Of

looked

was

man

long, (50) very of always (50) a man officer in business,(7) being an of a the Exchequer, (43) and good reputation generally,(30) inclined to be though known and

of

Puritan

against the leading

wholly The

party

furious

those

1

in

rest

he

was

the

to

was Pym superior to all the parliamentary experience. To this advantage

thought

served

had

he

these, Mr.

Church

men

devoted

were, to

;

to

and

the

inclined

other he

of

personalityof the tempters kept in the background.

be

set

(44)

Earl

of

his

business

continuous

in the

party, yet he

the other

the

from

He Exchequer. had also a good reputation generally ; for, though known

resolutions as

habits

acquired service

not

yet

added

and

to

was

the not

against the

so

Puritan cally fanati-

Church

as

leaders.

In

this

spect re-

resembled

the

Earl

of

organizers of the conspiracy is

posely pur-

68

Continuous

founa in Parliament, (30) (43) it was (44) when covered quickly dishe the that,as ling darwas of his father, so (5) he like to make was soever good whathad

he

for many

years

Exercises. Parliament.

Then,

indeed, it

that quickly likely to fulfil even fond hopes of his father the high promise of discovered

was

he

was

the and

years.

many

promised. The

(5) was

a

other, Sir of

man

H.

Vane,

great natural

*

(45) and of very profound dissimulation,of a quick conception,and of very ready,

parts

and

sharp,

weighty

Fiennes'

coadjutor, Sir

Vane,

was

natural

ability.1 Quick

a

and

H.

great

in understanding

impenetrable

dissembling,he with

of

man

could

also

in

speak

aspect, which, though it might

point, and weight. His singular appearance, though it might naturally

naturally proceed

proceed

He

father

had

and

which

an

life made

and

very

in Oxford,

the

great exactness,

after

his

care

not

(43)

he

a

not

full

reverence,

that he had

the form

the

turgy, Li-

generally who

where

Oxford,

at

Magdalen

In

much to

sentence

he

studied

spite

supervision of

very

by tutor, Soon after spent and

a

a

severe

leaving in

of

an

the

by

Church,

not,

were

is

a

which

he

After he

ceived con-

hatred

not

many,

was

also

but

Liturgy,which was and general reverence. or

by his displeasureof at

was

the

in France,

Geneva.

intense

at

worthy morality.

Oxford

littletime

some more

the

not

was

characterized, in

please, dis-

able, highly conformexceedingly sharp

This

by

behaviour

College,

of

disliked

against the held in great

cur, seeming to ingiddiness, the his father, who

that time, beside strictly forming conto the Church himself, very

bitter

stillappeared

against those

confirmed

was

of his life. His

whole

Incurring

(30) (43) his father, who

who

thing some-

extraordinary,an impression that

even

were

other.

giddiness,which displeased,or seemed

and

in him

the

only against the government

then

his

belief

beauty,

with

men

prejudice

(15 a)

many

for their

impressed

yet

who

parents,

returning to England,

and was

his

(43) England,

against

of those friends to (5) the

with

spent

and,

;

of the government (43) which

great

very with

againstthe

both

Church,

a

lived

bitterness

and

of

into

retuni

(38) contracted

in

College (43) though

Geneva

in

more

his

in France, and

little time

some

time

from

where,

tutor, he

worthy

tion. imagina-

from noted

not

were

traordinary ex-

Magdalen

under

promptness,

whole

short

returned

in

was

that

a

of

(52) his

good

he

persons, think there

in him

Within

he

of

neither

men

:

after

his

beautiful

somewhat

studies

from

mother,

were

yet (19) made was

expression. (50) unusual

left his home This

preliminary summary

against

conformists, Non-

Vane the young for New England.

colony had of what

been

follows.

planted

Clearness. transportedhimself into New England, (43) a colony within few years before planted of all religions,1 by a mixture which disposed the professors (5)

he

dislike

to

the

the

who

to

choose

government

and

charter

under

that

choosing

man

to

hence,

nor

years

the

them

of

scruple amongst complying with those so

:

from

far

men

tions obligain

were,

He

(45) there,

landed made

was

no

sooner

his

but

parts

him

quickly taken notice of, (26) and very probably his quality,being the eldest son of a Privy-councillor, might give him

advantage

some

season

of

for

came

their

the

was

their governor: (30)(45) (43) in which place he had so ill

(26)(his working

unquiet fancy raising and a

and fusing in-

scruples of

conscience, which not nor

1

(5) they had with brought over them, heard of before) (19) that he "

If

which"

their differences that but 2

I have The

between

were

found

is used "

;

of

here

if it is used a

nature

difference

following words the infancy and

also

with

the

arrival

this

was

had

he

landed

to

notice

:

he

was

of

changed. than

all

Vane No

sooner

his

ability, his extent perhaps to some eldest of son a position, as recommended Privy-councillor, and

him

election

and

at

the

chosen

new

next

vernor. Go-

post, his restless

and

unquiet imagination found opportunity for creating and tious consciendiffusinga thousand scruplesthat had not been or ever brought over, even heard of, by the colonists. His

proved

government

failure

:

governor

and,

mutually

(45) governed Vane parted.

a

satisfied, disand re-

according to Rule (8),the meaning is,(a) "and for gions that,"the meaning will be, (b) all reliI believe (a) is the meaning to dispose "c." ; "

"

of opinion on the question. to be emphatic, bringing out appear

the

supremacy." been

had

slightest scruple. Indeed, lawfuloaths scruples against "2 unknown in the infancy were of the English schism. But

In his

election

magistrates,he

thousand

oaths

the

for many years the afterwards,without exciting

next

chosen

fortune

take

allegianceand

much inso-

;

the

(51) that, when

should

not

but

infancy (i$}of their schism, refusing to take lawful

oaths.

own

nal only by all the origion planters, receiving their charter, before leaving England,

was

after

least

the

of

taken,

selves they transported themfrom

it

their

These

"

in many

of the

government

happened privilege(accorded king's charter) of

man

every oaths

the

premacy suallegiance and which (30) (43) (5) ; all the first planters did, when their charter, they received

there

religions, J disposed them

ment governject subwas governors this obligation,"that

of

before

of

men

and

own

take

by

and

Now,

their the

by

governors,

should

sorts

Church.

obligation, "that

the

every oaths

their

of

to dislike the

king's

the

before

years

their differences

(30) (43)

by qualified

(44) were

few

all

of

government

Church;

a

development

of schism.

the difference

Continuous unsatisfied with with

him,

himself

and

retransported England ; (30)(43)

into

(44) having

sowed

such

there,as

prosperously,and divided

into several

they

he

of dissension too

them

Exercises. turned

to

till he

had

England, but not accomplished his

mischievous

seed

had

task, the

sown

miserable

grew up ably miser-

seeds

of

those

dissensions

afterwards

the

till he

not

which

only

grew

too

perously, pros-

till

colony poor sions factions,and divi-

they split the wretched colony into distinct, and hostile, mutually persecuting

and

persecutions of each (15 a] other (30) (43) which still continue to the great (54) prejudice of that plantation: insomuch of (5) them, as some the of their first ground upon expedition, liberty of conscience,

factions.

His

work handi-

,

have

withdrawn

from and from

the

it is -remains, and owing to (15) him that some of the colonists,on the pretext of

liberty of conscience, the of their emigration, originalcause

selves them-

their

(5)

obtained

still

from

tion, jurisdic-

other

fresh

of

men

government, they have enlarged their plantations,within new limits to adjacent (5) (15 a)

forms

of

the other.

borders

colonial

have

obtained

from

charters

These

(30) (43)

forms

other

selves them-

old

the

and jurisdiction

ters char-

king, by which,

in

withdrawn

have

the

king.

established

have

government,

new

unduly

their boundaries, and the rival settlements on

enlarged set

up

of the

originalcolony.

BURNET.

The

principalfaults

(see 43)

sentences

styleare

in Burnet's

(b]

;

(a) the

of heterogeneous

use

of suspense want (see the omission (d] (see 5) ;

the

of pronouns

30)

;

of

(c) the ambiguous use and an excessive use of and connecting adverbs and conjunctions, one topic to abruptness in passing from (see 44) ; and (e) an faults necessarily correction of these another (see 45). The

lengthens the

honour

his

maintaining the

of

foreign countries (l)vanity which

nation

of which

he

was

carefulthat, though a

head,

crowned

had

ambassadors

paid them

which

ambassadors

ever

all

in

is very natural

so

(30) (43) (15) (17 a)

;

he

was

He

the

gratifiedthe

(50) to Englishmen

not

yet his (40 a)

(15)kings'

had

(6 b) the dignity of

:

the

he said crown

lish gratifiedthe Engby feeling of self-respect also

nation So

foreign countries.

in all

jealous

he

was

crowned

head, he

paid

been

had

not

was

yet secured all the respect

for his ambassadors that

this

on

he

point that, though a

of the

the honour

maintaining

all the respects our

VERSION.

PARALLEL

VERSION.

ORIGINAL

And

version.

altered

of

ambassadors

The

king, he said, received

simply

as

our

the

to

kings.

the

spect re-

nation's

Clearness. was

the

upon

of the

account

nation, of king was (50)only the representative head; which

the

so, the nation being the same, he would have the same gards re-

paid to (41) his Another2

pleased with

of

(5) this

much.

Blake

the fleet happened^}

to be

Malaga before he made upon Spain : (44) and some at

his

seamen

went

met

the Host

carried

and

war

of

ashore, and

about; (44)

only paid respect it,but laughed at those who of did; (43) (30) (51) so one the priests put the people upon not

this

resenting indignity; and and they fell upon (5) them beat them severely. When returned to their ship (5) they they complained of (5) this and

usage;

upon

to demand

the

the

chief

over

the not

The

the

not

were

viceroy

he

was

in that

swered viceroy anno authority

the

to

of following instance jealousyfor the national honour When much. pleased him Blake his at Malaga with was with before his war fleet, Spain, of his It happened that some sailors

but

prieststo resent the people fell beat

their

a

kind

the

instigator of the outrage. The that he viceroy answered could not touch him, as he had the priests. no authority over

their

of the

2

No

that,

complaint (5)it,(5)he would

of antithesis instance

has

sent

burn

sent

a

is

this ill-

within

answered

meaning

of

Blake

to the viceroy to messenger demand the priest who was

To

this Blake

"

his, and

between

yet been

"

have and

mentioned.

and

would people towns-

condition at

once

his

of

the

But

sailors.

plied reEnglish (50) Admiral that a complaint should

been then

punished the

he

The

fended arrival,he dehimself, alleging the

insolence

"

hours,

town.

On

sent.

therefore the nation

three the

being in no the priestwas resist,

seamen.

The

On

shipthe

a

the

x

scoffers

burn

but

petulant behaviour

of

the

whereupon

usage,

the

severely. to

complained

seamen

who

indignity,

the

on

it,

to

of

one

the

them

return

Host,

those

at

Incited

and

ing meet-

respect

no

laughed by

even

did.

and

processionof the

only paid

not

the

(5)Aim

ashore

within

him,

(43) and

to

going

the

if he

to

power

condition

(44) Blake (5) he had

paid

three

word

inquirewho

not

would

if

be

nation's ministers.

The

to

;

no

1

the

same,

respect should

same

(5) they,being to resist him, the priest to him, (43) sent who himself upon (44) justified town

in

was

since

send

him

sent

the

replied,that he intend did to not inquire to whom the authoritybelonged, if the sent not but, priestwere

sent

(i)

so

Blake

disposeofhim.

priest to

hours,

the

(15) priests, and

that upon that he would

the

Blake

priestwho

had

he

could

that

(l) instrument

ill-usage.

had

to

trumpet

a

nation

no

to

sent

the

ministers.

instance

him

head, and, representative

forwarded he them

would

the

nation's

him, have

severely, for

nation's, ministers." "

to

There

ministers."

is

Continuous have

them

punished

since his

(5)

to

men

not

affront

the

set

on

Spaniards

for he would

it ;

only

was

so

mercy. Cromwell

much

of

name as

that of

ever

had

been. were

(5) him

that

him

a

in such

dread

took

they

of

give (43) (44) and the

his brothers

to

king

or

Royal,

(23) within

after,(5) they deputation to States

give

them

that no

tavus

Algernon not

was

speak

1

The :

"

of

a

that

me

the

was

spected rename

countries

of

Cromwell

the

in such

were

that

they

to

care

free

on

not

these

; and

only with

of Sweden favourite

under

Charles

whom

he

confidential terms,

most

also

kingdom

Cromwell's

Gustavus,

or

was

of

name

much

as

ever

with

said, "I

the

dread

ally;

mended com-

ally

ing Read-

in council

other

was

under

Christina.

was

but Both

tions sovereigns had just nopublicliberty; at least,

of

is implied, and

favourite

conduct.

letters

Holland

The

who

think

kings,

(5) to

thought Cromwell's

to

delighted

of

(44) CarolusGus-

well him

this

two

should

Sydney, (io#)

back.

give him no sort of ever umbrage. Accordingly, whenhis brothers the king or Princess the to see came Royal their sister, they were always warned in a day or two by a Cromwell had that deputation required of the States to give them no harbourage.

he lived in great conjunction of counsels. Even (44) inclined

him

much

was

Blake's

with

offender

entertained

sent

States

alliance

favourite

\vasSweden.1

Cromwell

took

harbour.

Cromwell's and

;

know

(5) they

(50)

Blake

and civilly

Among

required of

had

at his mercy,

of

send

to

them

let

Cromwell

that the

used

having

as

came

or

only to man." English-

of Roman."

Princess

day

a

is

satisfied

the

hope an Englishman

anytime

at

sister the

their

see

when

my all the

I shall make

to

care

trymen counyour work ; for I world know

he great satisfaction,

of

umbrage

sort

no

on

Then,

(15 a) States

set

do

had

the

great

The

it ill that

take

Englishman punished by an

with

the

as

"I

an

be

with

make

Roman

(44)

Holland

to

lighted de-

said he

; and

should

English man

an

place "But,"

should

him

and

(5) this, (43)

great satisfaction

(6) hoped

any

will have

at his

him

the letters in council

he

lished estab-

;

was

with

the

religion of added,

that

be

affront

to

(5)

all the

should

they touched.

you

Englishman punished by

satisfied that he had

read

he

the

him

sent

he

(43) (44) and priestcivilly, back (30), being

he treated

and

; but

an

to be

Englishman

an

where

do

to

have

that

to know

world

place

ill,that

his sailors

allowed

lished estab-

any touched

it

of

none

suffer

of

religion which at (5) he (5) (6) he took the

severely,

would

he

Exercises.

should a

be

expressed, by

free country.".

the

words, is

Clearness. said he

(5)had justnotions of public liberty; (44) (43) and added,

that

seemed

to

But

at

have

(44) she

from

us

Queen them

a

true

the

from

All

and

was

up

the

and

over

for (5) it.

executed

our

than

Nor

offend

the

whose

keeping

up

character

of

land,1 Holof

name

him

durst

the

great (50)

fleet scoured and

Mediterranean; gave up Hyde,

even

tion. na-

dreaded

died.

Protector

then

factious

the

at

and

Cromwell,

(23)(43),

king brought

less

Italy,no trembled

ambassador

there

the

kept

for she

;

complained of the unruly spiritof

till he ; and the Turks Turks offend him livered ; but de-

up Hyde, the character of an

Rome

at

Mediterranean

who

was

also held

and

(A^ a] of our princes. at the (44) All Italy trembled of seemed and name Cromwell, under a (i)panic as long as he lived ; (43) his fleet scoured the not

He

same

her

on

commands

durst

this

me

of Gustavus.

tainly cer-

favour

opinion of Queen Christina ; but, if so, she was much I waited changed when

her

on

royalty,assured

the

changed

with

readily comply

not

likewise.

; for she complained of factious nation, that did

Rome as

of

I waited

that,when

Algernon Sydney, a man not prejudicedin

Christina

much

was

73

in

they for

who,

Turkey

ambassador

the from

the

king, was brought England and executed. (44) (ii a) The brother of the ambassador

putting the king of Portugal's for

death

to

very in the strictness

nations, it

is

own

exempted

of the

only the (4) any

(47 a) sends him, yet

the

to him.

his

foreigners

is

of

the

brother

of

law

the

to

ambassador's Successful

(41) (44)Cromwell good (n) under-

was

in

than

no

nations

alone, yet

exemption

has

of

the

the

whole

suite.

abroad, Cromwell

less successful

selectingable for

for

tion foreignjurisdic-

practicethe

extended

practice has

of

carried

the ambassador

that

verity se-

the

justice For, though in

far.

from

exempts

rity authoin

of "

Cromwell

"

very strictness

in favour of all that the gone ambassador owned long (47 a} to beshowed

towards

murder

sador's ambas-

but his masters

instance

Portuguese ambassador

the

of

law

that

person from

another

execution

der, mur-

(n a) carrying justice far ; (43)since,though

was

In

to

at

and

home

worthy

ally public duties, especi-

nothing of law. for the courts In capable and seeking2 out for all employmore nothing did he show ments, worthy men his natural but most insight, particularly clearly great standing

\\\

more

men

in

1

The

remarks

about

Christina

are

a

digression,and

Burnet

is

now

ing return-

by foreign nations. "find" is not neces2 He not only sought, but sought successfully. That the word of the in the out" "seek use proved by. seems irilyimplied by out very and ii. 17 : "He Ai.uthorized Version, 2 Tim. diligently, sought me found me. to

the respect

in which

Cromwell

was

held

Continuous

74

of law, (43)

for the courts which

(lOtf)

Exercises.

(30^7) general

a

gave

nothing contributed popularity,

and

more

his

to

satisfaction. BISHOP The

in this

principalfaults sometimes

(5), and would

be

BUTLER.

(b) the

Some

certain that been

(5)one But

revelation

no

a

a

as

(15 b]

in

man

the

had

the

ness serious-

the

simplicitycan possibly considers (5)so, who of state religion in the it

heathen

world

and in

tion, revela-

borrowed

of

(12) greatest men thingsof the utmost well

as

natural

It is

have

reasoned

system

have

and

which

been

(15 a) rance igno-

1

"To

2

It has

even 4

as

style,but

revealed mark tention inatof the

even

by

doubtful a

vital

Socrates

subject

a

of

immortality

soul ; and

then and

lightof

the

in seriousness

sincerity

the

that

can

he

tain main-

Nature

is

whole

It is of

deny

genuine supersti-

in

that

impossibleto

course some

second

4

totle Aris-

might have reasoned out, its genuine simplicityand incredible,"

inconceivable."

Wanting"

This

its of

the

ceived re-

sufficient ?

to

call natural

we

yet

ignorance

so

the

those

of

also

language held on

that

in

not

"to put forward," "maintain." pretend" once meant been suggested, however, that by "in its very notion "

is meant

able

that

out

religion, (30) in simplicity,clear

4

the

as

and

natural

the

but

masses,

in general. of mankind (34) impossibleto say (12)

would

"

the

vailed preworld

all,let him

merely

let

(41)

once

have

and

concerning (1 1 ) importance,

inattention

who

3

of

some

But

heathen

light

to or

spiritual

prevails

that

; above

not

as

would

the

revelation,

the

no

sense

needless

given.

the

still

truth

light from (5) it; particularly(19) the doubtfulness

been

in

(41)

been

revelation

no

that

regions

(5) present state (n) places (8) which

assuredly,

a

consider

before

is in

Nature

revelation

its

those

have

before

And

in such

any man darkness

ground

Nature

light of

have

tially essensarily neces-

the

lightof

itself sufficient.

ever

useless.

wanting,or

and

fictitious, on that

2

as

incredible

useless,

render

to

avowedly

persons revelation

rejectall

and think

word

a

VERSION.

Some

render

the

sufficient

been

sense 3

not no

phrase, where

sufficient

would

had

given, (32) Nature

such

of pronouns

use

vague

a

PARALLEL

(15) upon sufficiency of pretence the light of Nature, avowedly reject all revelation as, in its (47 a) very notion, incredible, and what (47 a) mtist be fictitious. indeed And (32) it is

in

use

VERSION.

persons, of the

l

light of

of

enough (47 a).

ORIGINAL

have

(a)

style are

use

is used

of the

it adds

for modern

"wanted."

particular for the general would

clearness.

be

out

of

place in

Butler's

Continuous and

boundless

is a

great and

affairs.

has is

make

to

lastingimpression

human

on

that it

resources,

obviously destined

been

Its

(50) progress (5)it"1

slow, but

that account the only on be durable. to likely (5) has not suddenly risen to

more

It

greatness, like the in ancient Alexander that of

or

force

the

of individual

the accidents

genius, or (54) casual fortune, but has slowly advanced, and (40 a) been firmly consolidated (15) of ages, during a succession of

the

from

and

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